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Loved this. I liked how you described Clark's torn aura and the sensations that caused. Well done. I'm waiting for that last part.

Blueowl, I finally caught up on this series! Very interesting take on this Clark Kent--especially in the Superman persona. He seems much more secure/mature than the TV character. I keep waiting for the villain to pop up and take advantage of how much he does share of himself! Great job on the action scenes where your originality and creativity really shine! They are so real; I feel like I have a front row seat!! Great movie material! The aura incident is a perfect illustration. Can't wait to see where this goes. Also looking forward to the progression of the romantic relationship between Lois & Clark.

Thank you for sharing your work!

bakasi - I've been waiting so long to post it ^_^ Thanks

Penny_Lane - Thanks Yeah, I figured his different backstory would cause him to have a bit more experience and confidence (from serving in the Air Force and solving cold cases for years before that). Anyway, glad you enjoyed the action scenes, some of them have been brewing in my head for years. As for their relationship, more to come....

Here is the last scene of the first half of Keeper: Mend

Please let me know what you all think

I love how you solved your aura problem in the end. Very nicely done. And I hope to see more Lois and Clark interaction in the second half of Keeper.