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Summary: First half of 3rd Act of AU series, Investigate. The world has embraced the Man of Steel, which is good, because the future holds more than he may be able to handle on his own. Although not required, reading Acts I, II & Interlude is helpful, as this Superman/Clark is not like canon much at all: Investigate, Investigate: Intergang and Investigate: Time InterludeAgain, thanks to Morgana, Chereche, and KSaraSara for their beta work and feedback ^_^. Here is the first chapter: BakedAct III takes place in season 3, although much of what happened in season 3 will not occur here due to what had happened in Acts I & II. Hope you all enjoy ^_^
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This was a nice surprise. I liked the first part of Act III. The volcano eruption and the bakery sale were quite the contrast. I hope Lois will be able to provide a little TLC for out dear Clark.
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I loved the bake sale! And creating a tornado to get the ash cloud? So smart! You definitely do so well at writing action scenes!
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bakasi - Glad you enjoyed. There will be much more relationship building to come and certainly some TLC ^_^. KSaraSara - Thanks I'll admit they're my favorite to write. Next part will be up shortly.
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Chapter 2 is up ^_^. Hope you all enjoy. Interview
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Thank you for sharing another intriguing chapter. Though I must admit that I would have loved to see a scene where Lois tends to a very tired Clark after he returned from the volcano. But I guess we can't have everything. Liked the interview.
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Bakasi -- Well, I went ahead and added such a scene..... Guess you can have everything Thanks for the idea ^_^ Morgana -- Thanks ^_^ And thanks for betaing!
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What a nice surprise after a long day of work. I love the interlude. Makes an already good chapter so much better. Thank you.
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Here is the next chapter: Chapter 3: ChildHope you all enjoy. Please let me know what you think
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Yeah, another chapter. I like how your Clark handles things. He doesn't get blindsided quite so regularly.
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bakasi - Thanks ^_^ I figure with this Clark's experience and training, he'd be more resistant to public pressures and such. Anyway, the next part is up Part 4: Control
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Another great chapter. I, too, am looking forward to that interview. Should be interesting how the world reacts to his virgin status. I always wondered why Clark never mentioned this to Lois in the episode, which was before the virtual reality episode, if I remember correctly.
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bakasi - I really wonder about that too. It would have solved a lot of problems Here is the next chapter: Questions
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A speedy follow on post Here is chapter 6: Torn
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Great, I love it,canβt wait for more
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Yay, I was waiting for that chapter. Loved both. Can't wait to read more
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sunshine6812 - Thanks ^_^ bakasi - The chat on discord/skype certainly helped me write it ^_^ Next part is up: Aura
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I'm still biting my nails. Tough chapter. Liked every bit of it.
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bakasi - Thanks, the toughness I hope will pay dividends later Here is the next part: Essence
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