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FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) #292157 06/19/22 07:53 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 653 Likes: 5 Chapel Hill, NC A AnnieM OP Columnist
OP AnnieM Columnist A Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 653 Likes: 5 Chapel Hill, NC	Finally.... Being a reporter is as much a diagnosis as a job description. ~Anna Quindlen

Re: FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) AnnieM #292159 06/19/22 09:36 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany	Ahh, that kiss. How can they go back to being pen friends now? Something needs to happen, and soon. Clark, tell her that you only need a few minutes to travel to Kansas. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) AnnieM #292162 06/19/22 06:12 PM
Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,362 Likes: 1 Tulsa, OK Mike M Top Banana
Mike M Top Banana Joined: Apr 2013 Posts: 1,362 Likes: 1 Tulsa, OK	Very nice chapter. Loved both Cat and Jimmy's reaction. Perry's moment also was well done as it sets up some potential moment on the long distance relationship front... However they will, I suspect, have to get past Jonathan's reluctance first as I am getting the idea that he wants to keep Clark in Smallville to keep him protected. Next few chapters should begin to flesh out the next step... Create all the happiness you are able to create. Remove all the misery you are able to remove. Jeremy Bentham

Re: FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) AnnieM #292163 06/19/22 06:14 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	The last chapter did NOT end at a cruel place. It ended at the perfect place. Secret not-boyfriend is now outed in the newsroom. Jimmy approves. Perry approves, too, although we (and they) already knew that. Even Cat approves (of the relationship, not so much the brush-off Clark gave her). I'm stunned. Lois let him edit her copy. No, really, he edited her copy! Without being asked! And she smiled! Incredible in the classic sense! And - this is actually the topper - she took his suggestion on the story. Completely unprecedented. We'll have to watch for a rain of frogs in the next chapter. Don't tell me you're not putting these two through severe emotional pain. Seeing the goodbye at the taxi was wrenching. And the cabbie could take Clark to the airport via Michigan and Clark wouldn't know it. Next chapter, please. Make the earth spin faster so Monday can come sooner. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) AnnieM #292164 06/19/22 07:19 PM
Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA cuidadora Features Writer
cuidadora Features Writer Joined: Jul 2014 Posts: 917 Likes: 2 East Coast USA	I'm loving this story. And I have to agree with Terry; I didn't find the last chapter's ending cruel. It left me imagining, well, something close to what you wrote for this chapter! The whole story is beautifully written. My only concern is that it's only 10 more chapters! Cuidadora "Honey, we didn't care if you were a Russian or a Martian... You were ours... and we weren't giving you to anybody." ~ Martha in Strange Visitor "A love that risks nothing is worth nothing." ~ Jonathan in Big Girls Don't Fly

Re: FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) AnnieM #292165 06/19/22 09:22 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,161 Sydney Australia C Crazy_Babe Kerth
Crazy_Babe Kerth C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,161 Sydney Australia	So worth the wait!!! They are so adorable together, can’t wait for Lois to get the third degree from Cat because just her image of who mystery guy was hilarious and far far from the truth. Dreamy Lois is a fun Lois to be around. It’s always fun to see her completely lost for words around Clark. The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched they must be felt with the heart Helen Keller

Re: FDK: Written in the Stars (20/30) AnnieM #292167 06/19/22 10:01 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	Just caught up with everything, and loving this SO MUCH! ^_^ The way they interacted at the Planet had me grinning the whole time. I can't wait to see how she learns and how she reacts to his whole self.

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