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Time to start untwisting the knot.

Please tell me what you think.


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Aww, so glad he got to talk with Martha. I really hope he opens up to his parents fully one day and I can't wait for him to return to Lois.

This fire has me a tad concerned. I hope all goes well there.
Looking forward to more ^_^

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I also hope Clark opens up fully to his parents or Lois one day. He needs to talk about what happened to him to fully heal. I’m glad his subconscious lead him home and that he was able to talk to Martha. She’s better than any paid psychiatrist.

I have a bad feeling about the fire but with people in danger, he can’t ignore it. I hope more is coming soon! Thank you!

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Martha Kent is always a good first step in "untwisting the knot!" Martha's conversation with Clark gives some insight into the pain and scars that she must carry also. Her strength and wisdom bring a measure of lucidity into the picture.

Bakasi, good job here in emphasizing the difficult situation confronting Clark. And it’s deeper than his fear of losing control in an intimate setting. By some means, he must deal with the residual effects of the torture and brainwashing he endured before he can have a real open and honest relationship with Lois. In his shoes, I would be much more likely to work through this with a stranger rather than family. But, because of his secret, his options are limited. At the same time, he is so fortunate to have the Kents and Lois.

Anxious to see how this plays out.

Thank you for sharing this intriguing story with us. thumbsup


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Thank you all for your feedback. I'm glad you seem to like this story so far. The fire might hold a surprise for you wink Posting that part tomorrow.


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I was a little concerned about the fire along with Lois not answering the phone. Can't wait to see what's in store for us.


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