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#292326 07/05/22 01:02 AM
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Knock, knock... do you have some sense now, Clark?

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I enjoyed this chapter a lot! Thankfully Clark has some sense now. They’ve come up with a good solution and I’m glad Clark will never do that again. I just hope he doesn’t beat himself up again if he floats. I’m sad there is only one chapter left though there are two remaining Nfanfic chapters. I can’t wait for more! Thank you!

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The "knocking" tactic seems to be working. thumbsup

Although it was painful for both, it looks like the exposure/attack is imposing further in-depth confrontation between Lois & Clark. And likely sooner than otherwise might have occurred. I really like the raw honesty that is happening between them. Now, we learn that it’s not entirely all about Clark’s fears. Lois is sharing some deep-seated fears of her own!

While there is no surefire solution, continued progress is even more evident here, in that they are together and agreeing on next steps.

Good job Bakasi in taking a more realistic approach to the risks involved in a human/alien relationship. We saw a cursory look at the topic in Lethal Weapon, but nothing as realistic as your story. And this is much more complicated in that Clark learned to control his powers at the hands of torturing tyrants rather than his loving parents, the Kents.

I am looking forward to learning how everything works out. But, if your muse is so inclined, I would definitely love to see a part 3!! clap

Thanks again for writing this story.


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Originally Posted by Songbird
I’m sad there is only one chapter left though there are two remaining Nfanfic chapters.

Let me say that this story was written as nfic and later adapted to meet the criteria for the PG-13 section. I realize I'm walking a fine line here, which is harder for me I guess, because in my country violence tends to create higher ratings than sexual content would. (There is even a joke that if you walk naked across the street carrying a weapon, you'd get arrested in Germany for possessing a weapon and in the USA for being naked.)
I wrote this story to explore how this Lois and Clark would find their way to intimacy. And while writing it I thought that the journey would still be worth reading if I omitted certain explicit descriptions. Even in Live Another Day, I had created a level of unresolved sexual tension between the characters. If you just read the pgfic, you will be cheated out of a bit of character development, but the story is largely the same. I will post those last two nfic chapters on the same day.

Thank you for reading and leaving feedback.

@Penny Lane: I'm glad you're liking this story so much that you're even asking for a third part. I have been thinking about it, but so far my muse hasn't come up with anything but the barest plot points. Certainly not enough to develop a story. And at the moment, I'm more inclined to make Canon-Clark's life a little miserable. wink. But if my muse changes her mind or someone throws a plot-bunny at me that turns those bare plot points into a story, who knows?


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Glad Clark is slowly seeing the light. Lois has definitely worked her patience to the max. I'm sure it'll pay off soon wink

Looking forward to the next part ^_^


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