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Well, that was a lovely, sweet chapter. This seems like the perfect time for a weekend break. See you monday! wink


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It was a lovely, sweet chapter until the last two paragraphs!! Talk about a cliffhanger! I hope Clark’s reflexes are very, very fast, like in the episode Witness. He’s not going to be able to claim it’s magic after this.

Weekend?? I don’t think this is a perfect time for a weekend break! Why don’t we just cancel the weekend and make tomorrow Monday? That works. Please?

All kidding aside, thank you!! I love this universe!! I hope the weekend flys by at warp speed because I can’t wait for more!!

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Ha! Lovely and Sweet. Absolutely! Could not possibly be better. love

However, it’s about that cliffhanger the size of Kansas that you managed to sneak in; and on Friday no less!! wildguy

Is this going to result in an accidental reveal? Possibly. But this scene is a bit reminiscent of one from the Witness episode (I think). And Clark managed to get away with catching a few stray bullets there.

You’ve demonstrated that you can seriously crank up the angst meter when the situation warrants!

Well done! thumbsup

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Argh!!! Can’t believe it’s Friday and you leave us hanging for the weekend with that cliffhanger! Hurry back and quickly!


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Another great chapter. And what a cliffhanger you left us with. Arrgh! Can't we speed up this weekend? I, too, am hoping for a revelation here. It would be a little fairer, too, because if she hated the truth (which of course she won't), she wouldn't be stuck in Smallville.


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What an excellent chapter! They spent the day together like any ordinary young couple in love. I especially enjoyed reading about them jogging in the park.

All of a suddenly.... BOOM!

Reveal time?


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