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#293157 10/03/22 05:50 PM
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I am having so much fun with this story. Thank you for the feedback. The previous chapter can be found here. My goal is to still have a new chapter every Monday up to Halloween. Enjoy.


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Intriguing so far. I agree with you the thing with Intergang never really resolved after HIWTHI just that they never ever went back to it to finally get Mindy. Looking forward the the rest!


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My favorite parts of this part… Mindy was great! Especially her tendency to just go off on what seems like a tangent, but really, she’s totally trying to distract from herself and keep up the bimbo act! And the other fav part was Clark’s list of why he doesn’t want to be at her place. lol Poor Lois!

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Lois is definitely spot on with Mindy, and I like that her instincts are chugging along ^_^

As for the apartment scene, I loved the couch bit smile1

Looking forward to more.


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