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FDK: Lois . . . #293218 10/07/22 10:21 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl OP Top Banana
OP Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	Summary: What if Clark had slightly different (better) priorities? Alternative ending to ‘And the Answer Is. . . .’ A/N: Another one-shot thanks to bakasi for causing a plot bunny to bite me. Here it is: Lois . . .

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293220 10/08/22 12:15 AM
Joined: Jul 2020 Posts: 401 Likes: 41 Southern California S Songbird Beat Reporter
Songbird Beat Reporter S Joined: Jul 2020 Posts: 401 Likes: 41 Southern California	I wish the series had done this! It’s so much better. I don’t think it was right that Clark proposed without telling Lois he was Superman. I’m glad Clark finally got his priorities right. Lois first! It was a sweet moment. Thank you!

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293221 10/08/22 12:17 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,110 Likes: 42 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,110 Likes: 42 Albuquerque, NM	Ahhh!! Ditto to what Songbird said! His whole speech leading up to the proposal was primed for secret telling! Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293222 10/08/22 02:35 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,668 Likes: 58 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,668 Likes: 58 Germany	Glad I spawned this plot bunny. This did indeed fix the scene. Part of the appeal of writing these inside stories is how the sometimes crazy plots came about. That's why I couldn't fix the scene. But I don't think I ever realized that Clark might not have meant to propose when he started talking It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293223 10/08/22 09:35 AM
Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,727 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields S scifiJoan Merriwether
scifiJoan Merriwether S Joined: Nov 2010 Posts: 1,727 Likes: 1 out in the cornfields	Love it!

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293233 10/08/22 11:22 PM
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Toomi8 Beat Reporter T Joined: Feb 2021 Posts: 441 Likes: 20 Alberta	That's fantastic! Quote “Well, I think if you had decided to do something stupid, like propose to me before telling me your secret, it’d be different. But that didn’t happen,” she explained, giving him a tight squeeze in joy. Clark, or Superman rather, closed his eyes in gratitude, so thankful he had acted as he had – choosing the best priority: Lois. . . . This was a great way to explain it. Thanks for feeding the bunny

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293245 10/10/22 10:39 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote He fell silent, wondering if she had put it together. However, she still remained quiet. He suspected she wanted him to say it. “I’m Superman,” he said finally. Its not very often that Clark is able to say those two words. In many fics he is interrupted or Lois blurts it out, taking away any chance Clark might have of stating his case. So glad in your short story that is not the case. Considering the fact that it took so long for him to gather up the courage to admit the truth, rightfully he should have been allowed to do so. Only one complaint, wasn't it raining the whole time? Why would Lois want to go flying and risk getting stuck by lightening? Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #293255 10/11/22 08:37 AM
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PuffyTiger Hack from Nowheresville P Joined: Jul 2016 Posts: 264 Likes: 10	'let's do this with a little more thought and maturity' is becoming one of my favorite things. Thanks for this!

Re: FDK: Lois . . . Blueowl #294090 11/30/22 03:45 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,085 Likes: 39	Hi Blueowl! Quote What if Clark had slightly different (better) priorities? Alternative ending to ‘And the Answer Is. . . .’ Like, first get out of the rain? Quote . “What I'm trying to say is, I almost lost you, Lois, and I'm ashamed.” Because he didn’t chip her so that he could easily find her whenever she gets lost. LOIS: I don’t get ‘lost’. Sometimes I just am unable to get home and Clark doesn’t know where l am. That’s not the same thing. Quote “Lois . . . I should have told you something a long time ago. But I was afraid. Perhaps even a coward, if I’m honest.” Aww, he’s telling her that she's his first long-term relationship. Quote He looked at her nervously, and then in slight confusion because she was suddenly grinning. “What?” he couldn’t help but ask. Boy, is she gonna be ticked off when he e doesn’t come clean now. Quote He looked back up and found her patiently waiting, or at least as patiently as Lois Lane ever could. Quote "Do you remember, when they came to the Planet, how . . . nervous I was?" he asked, looking away. "Yeah.” “Well, there was a reason for that. Government agency. Illegal alien. Quote “I’m Superman,” he said finally. What? How? /Goes back to watching show/ Huh, I never realized… Quote “I know. I knew the moment you did this,” she said as she cupped the side of his face with her hand. Well, the moment plus one and a half seasons. Quote “Yeah. I’m just so relieved you’re not upset with me,” he admitted. Well, he came clean… Quote choosing the best priority: Lois. . . . ~The End~ Awwww… Sweet little untwist Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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