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Anchor: Part I -- Clark Kent (1-3)Let me know what you think! This story (Part I -- Clark Kent, that is) clocks in at ~115,000 words, so I hope you all are in it for the long haul with me! -Bek
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*Does the first comment dance! *
Heeey, I've been hoping you'd post your stuff! I'm super excited to read it. I just read the first chapter, and wow! You capture the mood so very well! I love alt-Clark stories, he's in such a difficult position and I enjoy seeing how people help him out.
Know that I'll be eagerly waiting and cheering along in the background until it's done posting. Then it will be time to reeeeaaad!
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*Does the first comment dance! *
Heeey, I've been hoping you'd post your stuff! I'm super excited to read it. I just read the first chapter, and wow! You capture the mood so very well! I love alt-Clark stories, he's in such a difficult position and I enjoy seeing how people help him out.
Know that I'll be eagerly waiting and cheering along in the background until it's done posting. Then it will be time to reeeeaaad! I hope I'll have it all posted by about mid December, if I can keep up with a good schedule! Thanks for checking out the first chapter  I hope you like the rest of the story just as much  -Bek
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I am very intrigued by the premise and look forward to the next post ^_^. I really feel bad for this Clark and hope things will turn around for him 
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I'm intrigued as well. I'm not usually a huge fan of Alt-Clark stories. I like how you've portrayed him, though. He doesn't seem to be quite as depressed as I'd imagine him, which is a good thing, actually. I'm curious how the story between him and the widowed Lois will play out. Can she accept a different Clark? What will happen in a world where Nor was victorious. And how are these two Clarks connected?
Can't wait to read more
It's never too dark to be cool. 
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I am very intrigued by the premise and look forward to the next post ^_^.  I really feel bad for this Clark and hope things will turn around for him Me too!  Thank you for reading! -Bek
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I'm intrigued as well. I'm not usually a huge fan of Alt-Clark stories. I like how you've portrayed him, though. He doesn't seem to be quite as depressed as I'd imagine him, which is a good thing, actually. He's got a lot going on, but I think on the whole, he is a hopeful person. Or at least, he wants to be! I'm curious how the story between him and the widowed Lois will play out. Can she accept a different Clark? What will happen in a world where Nor was victorious. And how are these two Clarks connected? All great questions!
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I didn't think I would like this, but I love the perspective you have. I like how it is in first-person. This is going to be very interesting. I look forward to more. And oh boy, Alt-Clark doesn't have to return to his world.
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I didn't think I would like this, but I love the perspective you have. I like how it is in first-person. Thank you! It's difficult for me to write in first person (although for whatever reason, I find Clark easier to write in first person than Lois....her brain rambles too much and seems to jump all over the place!  )...and writing in present tense is also challenging.... This is going to be very interesting. I look forward to more. Thank you for reading! -Bek
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I am in just complete awe at this! I want to give you ALLLLL the comments but I'm currently on my phone, so that's not happening now. I can hope, as you post, that I can come close to landing adequate feedback!  For now, I just wanted to say this is amazing and so, so evocative! Amazing writing and emotions and ideas and... Yeah. All the things! Sara
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I am in just complete awe at this! I want to give you ALLLLL the comments but I'm currently on my phone, so that's not happening now. I can hope, as you post, that I can come close to landing adequate feedback! For now, I just wanted to say this is amazing and so, so evocative! Amazing writing and emotions and ideas and... Yeah. All the things! Sara Awwww, thank you!!!!  I don't know what else to say, so I'll just say I hope you like the rest of it just as much!!  -Bek
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