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Thanks so much for reading!

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“Oh sure,” she replied. “I always knew you’re a hack from nowheresville— I just didn’t realize how far away your nowheresville really was…”

Clark’s eyebrows shot up in response as he watched her. And then, slowly, she turned her head, meeting his eyes—

And she flashed him a wide grin.

“Krypton, Smallville— doesn’t really matter when it comes down to it. All that matters is that I was right.”

And then, despite everything, Clark felt a smile creep onto his own face.

“I guess I shouldn’t be surprised,” he said. “Because you’re always right— right?”

Haha! Love this interaction and the dialogue. Wonderful ending that, you're right, is just a beginning. smile1

Glad that Lois realized she loved him, but very in character of her to...withhold those feelings from him for the time being goofy

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He was the only alien known to mankind— but despite that, Lois suddenly wondered if there was anyone in the entire world who was more human than he was…

GAH my favorite line of this part!!!

And the way she slowly dragged the revelation out of him!

Thanks for a fantastic story!! …we’ll try not to be toooooo demanding about when to expect your next fic… goofy The readers around here are a bit voracious! wink

But seriously, whether you give us another story or not, we’re so glad to have you here!

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Thanks so much!! Lois and Clark’s banter is probably my favorite part of this series, so I’m happy I had a chance to write a small piece of it!! I appreciate the warm welcome, thanks so much for reading!!

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Thanks so much!! I had a feeling when I wrote that line that someone would end up commenting on it

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Oh wow. This one was surprisingly intense! Also, I must say, I've seen a lot of words about how Superman is the fantasy and Clark is the real man underneath, but this is the first fic I've read where Lois is heartbroken because *Clark* isn't real! And really, it's true: neither persona is 100% the real man. Just...kudos!!!


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Ha! I loved the bit about nowheresville too! That was brilliant.

I was so sad for Lois at the end of part 2, and through most of this one, but you gave it a very satisfying ending!

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Thank you! I’m so happy you liked it!

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Thanks so much! I’m so happy the ending resonated!

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I have often wondered what would have happened if Lois had seen that card.
This was a fun what if and the ending was a nice lead in to what might have been a very interesting continuation of this alternative take smile

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Hi Jerseygrl!
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For “Planet business.” Right, that’s why she usually tuned in to watch him, night after night, performing his saves, one after the next, in all of his glory… It was for “Planet business.” Not for any other reason…
So…one less viewer once she gets him in the altogether?

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Not because she cared about him. Not because she loved him… No. DEFINITELY not that.
Love. Lust. Meh. Same diff.

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He was the only alien known to mankind— but despite that, Lois suddenly wondered if there was anyone in the entire world who was more human than he was…
Interesting aspect here. Maybe 'human’ isn't the right adjective to describe this trait.

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But she couldn’t stop. So the tears continued to flow, until they were steady streams…
Well, that should give Clark some pause.

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He was wrong for her in SO many ways
Actually…

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But then her nose caught a whiff of a strange scent and she flinched, her eyes popping open on their own accord.
A stinkin’ lie about to come forth?

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“Lois, again, I’m sorry it took so long. Blockbuster was closed when I got there, and I had to go to the further one, you know, the one down by the other end of the park. But when I got there it had a long line out the door, and then one of the customers was having an issue with her credit card, and—“
Please bring some Chinese when your done digging.

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There it was again— that smell. It was SO strong and SO obvious; and then she wondered how she had never picked up on small details like this before…
He went to smoke crack?

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His eyes were wide now, as his negligence to fully address the post-save cleanup was clearly dawning on him.
He could say that the nudie-joint he was visiting had some really heavy smokers in the audience.

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“Oh, right, you see, I ended up passing really close to a structure fire down by the docks, and boy, that smoke was rising in huge plumes—“
Yes, *really* close.

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“Lois, I’m not sure what you’re—“
Aaaand they call her the stupid one …

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And then, finally, he managed to muster the courage to speak. “Yes,” he said, his voice barely louder than a whisper. “She’s going to be fine.”

He had said it. He had actually said it.
Actually, he only confirmed that he got the story from the fire marshal given everything was worded except the very first question. He can still wiggle out.

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And he didn’t even flinch. So she went ahead and gently tugged, and slowly his glasses peeled off of his face, leaving his brown eyes large— and open— and bare— and free— And here he was.
Nicely done!

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Lois cleared her throat. “Really,” she interrupted. “That’s the first question.”
Well, she can’t be mad. Or hurt. Or confused.

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And I mean— ANYONE. You think I just stroll around blabbing about what happened with Claude??”
So, not part of her 25-under-25 interview? Or her Kerth acceptance speech? Not even when she applied for her apartment lease and had to fill out the morals and ethics questionnaire?

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And then, finally, his shoulders fell as he sighed in defeat. He closed his eyes. “Ok,” he said. “Ok, I’ll go.” “I… look, Clark—“
She needs to be careful now. The previous times he got sent away, it was Lois who convinced him to stay. This time he'll be gone for good when she changes her mind.
LOIS: hmm… I’ll just call Martha!

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Oh sure,” she replied. “I always knew you’re a hack from nowheresville— I just didn’t realize how far away your nowheresville really was…”
Did Lois just diss New Krypton?

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Lois rolled her eyes again, even more dramatically this time. “Just watch and learn, Clark, watch and learn— and you’ll see how a real reporter gets it done…”
By dangling over the jaws of death until her partner shows up – late – to rescue her?

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Clark,” she said, suddenly exasperated. “The door is locked… think you can do something about that?” He glanced at her, noticing her watching him impatiently, tapping her foot on the ground…
laugh normally, the door unlocked without her needing to mention a problem. Really bad service.

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As far as the rest of it— there would be plenty of time for that…
Or until she realizes that neither one of her fantasies work anymore and she demands satisfaction for real.

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But whatever they faced— it would be together. Clark grinned. He couldn’t wait to see where his life would go next.
Fun ending to a fun story!

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Lois grabbed his hand, pulling him alongside her and into the building, pummeling headfirst into another investigation that he knew would inevitably grow sour…

But whatever they faced— it would be together.

Clark grinned. He couldn’t wait to see where his life would go next.

Sorry I was so late to the party. Thank you for a really satisfying read and hopefully we will see more from you.


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