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FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) #294242 12/09/22 03:07 AM
Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23 SuperBek OP Features Writer
OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23	Live To Fight Another Doomsday Thanks for reading! Honestly, the first half of this story has been sitting in my WIP folder for months, and I'd had a plan to turn it into something long (which is what my plan usually is)... However, I needed something for Ficlet Friday and decided I could just finish this story by...unraveling my own plot and fixing everything before it even had a chance to go south. Hope you liked it! -Bek

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294245 12/09/22 07:28 AM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,007 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl Top Banana
Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,007 Likes: 19 Central/Eastern USA	Awesome HG Wells finally does something well. Nice fix it fic Last edited by Blueowl; 12/09/22 07:30 AM.

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294247 12/09/22 08:46 AM
Joined: Jul 2016 Posts: 250 Likes: 10 P PuffyTiger Hack from Nowheresville
PuffyTiger Hack from Nowheresville P Joined: Jul 2016 Posts: 250 Likes: 10	Haha, I was just thinking the same thing about Wells. Finally, he does something actually useful! Nice plot untwist =)

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294248 12/09/22 09:15 AM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,784 Likes: 28 Somewhere on the East Coast	What a great story! Short to the point and most of all Wells saves the day! Hmmm, are you sure that wasn't The Flash's Harrison Wells? Saving the day in this dramatic fashion seems more like what he would do. I gotta admit Bek, would have loved to see the longer version of this story. Nonetheless, Happy Friday All! Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294249 12/09/22 09:31 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,628 Likes: 42 Germany	Love this fic. That's the way the Batman vs. Superman movie should have ended, if Doomsday was necessary at all. Great work It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) Morgana #294258 12/09/22 01:50 PM
Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23 SuperBek OP Features Writer
OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23	Glad everyone liked it! ...Wells might just be the interdimensional "chauffeur" for the crusade of Supermen -- they don't really give him much of an opportunity to talk, do they? Originally Posted by Morgana I gotta admit Bek, would have loved to see the longer version of this story. I might still write the longer version at some point! It's still playing around in my mind... Thanks again for reading, all! -Bek

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294264 12/09/22 07:10 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	You can whatever you want with your Doomsday monster, but in the comics it was created/developed by a Kryptonian scientist to be the perfect killing life form. The arid vacuum of space wouldn't kill it. And because it's Kryptonian, you can't point it at our sun without supercharging it. Maybe these Supermen actually put it on a collision course with a white dwarf so that ol' Doomy would be trapped in the star's gravity well until it collapsed into a black hole. Then there's no way to know what would happen to the creature, assuming it could survive even that. And I think even Superman's ethical prohibition on taking lives would survive Doomsday's demise. I like this tale. So they've taken care of fifteen Doomsdays now? Wow. That means that there are at least fifteen different examples of Lois Lane in the multiverse. Doomsday wouldn't bother with a world without a Lois since there probably wouldn't be a Superman there without her. I hope none of the Loises happened to be on her way to visit her Clark when the Super-Committee To Eliminate Doomsday (SCTED) showed up to help take care of the local monster. Ironic that you untwisted your own plot for this tale. Very inventive. Keep up the great work. And don't forget about the follow-up to Anchor, okay? Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) Terry Leatherwood #294265 12/09/22 09:10 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23	Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood You can whatever you want with your Doomsday monster, but in the comics it was created/developed by a Kryptonian scientist to be the perfect killing life form. The arid vacuum of space wouldn't kill it. And because it's Kryptonian, you can't point it at our sun without supercharging it. Maybe these Supermen actually put it on a collision course with a white dwarf so that ol' Doomy would be trapped in the star's gravity well until it collapsed into a black hole. Then there's no way to know what would happen to the creature, assuming it could survive even that. And I think even Superman's ethical prohibition on taking lives would survive Doomsday's demise. Yes! They hurled him out into space, not toward the Sun, not with the intention of killing him, but with the goal of putting him on a path that shouldn't collide with anything, at least not for many many many light-years At least, that was their intention! Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood I like this tale. So they've taken care of fifteen Doomsdays now? Wow. That means that there are at least fifteen different examples of Lois Lane in the multiverse. Doomsday wouldn't bother with a world without a Lois since there probably wouldn't be a Superman there without her. I hope none of the Loises happened to be on her way to visit her Clark when the Super-Committee To Eliminate Doomsday (SCTED) showed up to help take care of the local monster. SCTED! I like it! It is probably a good thing Lois was not around when they showed up! Originally Posted by Terry Leatherwood Ironic that you untwisted your own plot for this tale. Very inventive. Keep up the great work. And don't forget about the follow-up to Anchor, okay? I'm ready to start posting Part 2 if people want to read it! I know a few people are still finishing up Part 1. So hopefully soon! Thank you for reading, and, as always, thank you for the thoughtful comments!!! -Bek

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294299 12/14/22 03:38 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Hi Bek! Quote which contains absolutely no fluffs or waffs. Be warned, but also, don’t worry! smile /Eyes title/ Oh, it’s the DC Thanos Quote The creature was laughing at him. Aww, he wants to play! CREATURE: chew toy! Quote The raindrops turned red as they sluiced off the deep, ragged wounds in his head, shoulder, and side. Raindrops are falling on my head … Quote Gasping for breath, Clark Kent sat bolt upright in bed I did expect a dream from the summary And I just had an unreliable narrator bunny: Clark is on a date and has strange flashes of pain etc. Turns out he's actually fighting and the date is visions / flashbacks while struggling with unconsciousness. Quote and the end—his death—more and more inevitable. […] Who could possibly be knocking at 5:33 a.m.? Quote “There’s three of you. I mean… There’s three of me. I mean…” … Four? Quote This was their fifteenth stop, they’d told him… The fifteenth time they’d universe-hopped and banded together to save the life of another Superman They could build a Pyramid scheme from it! Quote Together, the four Supermen dove down to unearth the creature and prevent the tragedy of Clark’s nightmare from coming true, saving the day…yet again. The End. So, basically Doomsday got himself stuck in a Wells. Nice little untwist Now they need to visit Alt-Clark and fix his Lois-problem. ALT-CLARK: I don't have a Lois. CLARKS: Hence the problem. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) Darth Michael #294329 12/16/22 12:52 AM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23	Originally Posted by Darth Michael And I just had an unreliable narrator bunny: Clark is on a date and has strange flashes of pain etc. Turns out he's actually fighting and the date is visions / flashbacks while struggling with unconsciousness. Oh my! That would be tough (and interesting!) to write. Hmmmm! Originally Posted by Darth Michael So, basically Doomsday got himself stuck in a Wells. Originally Posted by Darth Michael Nice little untwist Now they need to visit Alt-Clark and fix his Lois-problem. ALT-CLARK: I don't have a Lois. CLARKS: Hence the problem. Michael Gah, poor AltClark! Good thing there are so many fics that have solved his Lois problem. Although that usually comes with a slew of other problems as well... Thanks for reading! As always, love your fdk! -Bek

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294360 12/16/22 05:19 PM
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Penny_Lane Hack from Nowheresville P Joined: Feb 2021 Posts: 168	Good story SuperBek! Kinda glad Clark faced Doomsday alone in a nightmare only! Sounds brutal and terrifying! I like HG Wells when he acts proactively BEFORE tragedy occurs! Well done.

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) SuperBek #294378 12/17/22 11:32 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,065 Likes: 31	Quote Although that usually comes with a slew of other problems as well... Hence the fun of it ALT-CLARK: Quote Thanks for reading! As always, love your fdk! Happy to, Bek! Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Live To Fight Another Doomsday (1/1) Penny_Lane #294396 12/17/22 10:55 PM
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OP SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 900 Likes: 23	Originally Posted by Penny_Lane Good story SuperBek! Kinda glad Clark faced Doomsday alone in a nightmare only! Sounds brutal and terrifying! I like HG Wells when he acts proactively BEFORE tragedy occurs! Well done. Yay! Glad you liked it! I agree, that nightmare would be pretty terrifying, and having it repeatedly for weeks... HG Wells sometimes gets things right! Thanks for reading! -Bek

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