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Here is the feedback page for my Season 1 of New Year's Eve. My contribution to Ficlet Friday. Thank you ahead of time for all of the feedback.

New Year's Season 1

Aww, Clark would definitely make sure she wasn't alone.
I'm glad she left Lex's party. Clark was right it's a party neither of them would enjoy
Nice ficlet of them

Love it! Very sweet story.

Agree that Clark would definitely not leave her to go to Lex's party alone (and soooo glad she left early).

Love the banner as well, and thank you again for your efforts, CarrieRene!! I can't believe Ficlet Friday has been so successful -- although am I correct that all three of us failed this week to write under 1000 words?


Thanks again for sharing!

-Bek

Thanks for a sweet story. I’m glad Lois left the party and that Clark went so she she wouldn’t be by herself. If Lois only knew what shortcut Clark took. Clark was right that it’s a party neither one needed to be at. I kiss for the future is a lovely ending! Thank you!

Thanks for a story that gives us a Lois Lane that appears to be more in touch with her real feelings! And a Lex Luthor that just begs to be slapped!
And Clark Kent to the rescue--no Superman in sight! Promising possibilities for the future.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.

BTW, I love your banners. You do a fantastic job with these.

Yes, I know there are not actually ficlets in terms. But I would think the effort we put it in counts. I haven't made the word count yet. Thank you.

Thank you. I do believe Clark would make sure she wouldn't be alone even in Season 1.


I know the shortcut I loved. Not like he would actually tell her. Thank you for the feedback.


Yes, a Lois that is more in touch with her feelings is very good. When didn't Lex need to be slapped! Yeah, no Superman, just the romantic Clark who would do anything for Lois. And thank you for the compliment on the banners. I love making them.

This paragraph is so great! It shows her discomfort with Lex and then does such a good job of explaining her state of mind. Because before this, I’m like, why the heck would she go to Lex’s NYE party?? But it’s *first* season Lois, and she *was* attracted to Lex on some level…she liked the attention or maybe it was even that she thought she *should* like the attention. So anyway, great job having her at the party and then telling us why and how she’s feeling!


GAHH! This was everything! Because… I mean, we all were *pretty* sure that the evening would end with them bringing in the new year together…but reading along, I just wasn’t sure how! Especially when it was too late for Perry’s party. But that he WENT there to find her?? Not to her apartment to just check if she was there, but to Lex’s party! This was an emotional twist that just got me in the FEELS.


And the kiss! Such a perfect wrap up for season 1!! Hope for the future! Aww!

Great work!

Sara

Hi Carrie-Rene!
Awww, she gets to kiss Lex at the stroke of midnight.

Probably discovered one of those blonde floozies he so often hangs out with.

Oooh her boyfriend!

Well, he does have a lot of money.

See, Lex has a solution for every problem.



She could investigate one of the local crime bosses hosting the party.

Stand on the balcony, give Clark a quick call so he knows what she's planning, then call for Superman and jump. Next, tell Superman where she wants to be taken.

Awww did Claude come by for a New Year’s get-together?

Superman was keeping an eye on a sketchy neighborhood and saw her leave.

The Earth is round. If you fly over the Arctic circle, you get there faster than anything in a straight line.
LOIS: Why would he fly over the Arctic when I'm just across town?
CLARK: Ummm…it had nothing to do with seeing her in that dress.

Awww…she's looking forward to winning another Kerth in the new year.

Perfect little story for the end of the year

Michael