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Savior (Prologue, 1-4)

Okay, here we go!

Comments?



-Bek

Wow. I'm really REALLY glad you'll be posting a lot and often! ^_^
I'm also glad you're focusing on his recovery. Some hurt and A LOT of comfort is my type of story tho I know he has a long road ahead of him.

Also, Lois is awesome

I'm not happy that you're crying, but I'm...happy that you're crying? Those chapters were certainly meant to paint a picture, and I guess they did!



I think the way I have it planned, it will be divided into six posts, so not too long to get the whole story up! But they are big chunks ~10k words/day.


Same! As Lois said, he's out of that prison, but the hard part is just beginning.



Lois IS awesome! And so is Martha, for never giving up hope, even after 15 years.


Thank you for reading!

-Bek

Comments… I suppose they’re in order of reactions?

1. This has to be one of the best depictions of Kryptonite exposure I’ve seen! I mean… GAHHHHH!

2. The Lois and Martha scene is EVERYTHING!

3. GAHHH they didn’t even let him have clothing?? SOOO SOOOO MEAN!! But ahhh, so glad he’s out of there now!

4. And the way she holds his hand… and stays at the hospital with him…

5. And the Martha and Jonathan reunion!!

GAHHHHH!!!!

Sara

[Assuming you are talking about the prologue] Thank you! ...If I can say 'thank you' for doing a good job writing about how a young child was kidnapped and tortured


Ahhh, I'm so glad you like this part. It was the first scene I wrote. Martha is pretty incredible.


They were monsters, treated him like he was an animal, not a person.




Lois is pretty incredible! With everything happening around him so quickly, Clark instantly latches onto her and knows he can trust her, and she senses how much he NEEDS her to be there and stay there.



GAHHH!!! This part was a scene I'd thought about for a while -- because how is Clark going to react? And he'd suppressed so many of his memories to just survive that place... So how would he feel seeing his parents again (who no doubt look older, different than they did 15 years ago)?? Would he even recognize them??



I love all of your reactions!

Thank you for reading

-Bek

This is heartbreaking and heart-wrenching and aww, poor Clark. I love the interaction between Lois and Martha, I love how Lois saves Clark and reassures him that he's safe now. Count might in for the ride (I'm in for the ride in Anchor, too, but hanging so far behind because I'm busy with other things)

Well done

Thank you! So glad to see that you're reading it, and I can't wait to hear what you think about the later parts

Lois and Martha = unstoppable forces!

Thanks for reading! (And hope you get caught up with Anchor too! I know it's...long! LOL)

-Bek