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FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (1/12) #294699 01/03/23 09:48 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl OP Top Banana
OP Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	So here is the first part to Act 4: Settling Happy New Year! Hope you all enjoy. Let me know what you think . I hope to post once or twice a week at least. In case you need them, the links to the previous Acts can be found here: Investigate Last edited by Blueowl; 01/03/23 10:02 PM.

Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (1/12) Blueowl #294701 01/03/23 10:36 PM
Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28 SuperBek Features Writer
SuperBek Features Writer Joined: Oct 2022 Posts: 904 Likes: 28	What a wonderful scene with Superman at the hospital with the children. I read the first Act of this series, but I'll admit I'm not yet caught up with the rest. Nevertheless, I really enjoyed the start here, and I'm excited to see where you go with this!! hurries off to go read Acts 2 and 3.... -Bek

Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (1/12) Blueowl #294702 01/04/23 09:26 AM
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bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,666 Likes: 58 Germany	Yay, the saga continues. I loved this first part, Clark talking to the children at the hospital. I liked how torn he was by his wish to help, knowing that it will cost him too much. Well done It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (1/12) Blueowl #294707 01/04/23 02:39 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,831 Likes: 42 Somewhere on the East Coast	Yay! Glad to see a new part in this intriguing series. Quote It was surreal to Lois. She never imagined herself being a house person. She had always envisioned herself living in an apartment in the city, but here she was, painting the walls of a home in a suburb on the perimeter of the city where she worked. The commute was a little longer, but considering everything, it was a fair trade. Better than fair, actually. It even had a perfect place to construct a secret closet, which Clark had built the first day they received the keys. No townhouse on Hyperion Drive? Lois a commuter? Yup, definitely continuing as an alternative universe. Like the paint race! SuperBek, you are in for a treat! Last edited by Morgana; 01/04/23 02:40 PM. Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (1/12) Blueowl #294708 01/04/23 02:55 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 574 Likes: 14 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene Columnist
CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 574 Likes: 14 Southern Pines, NC	Wow, so sad yet heartwarming. The way he wants to help those children and how you showed us how much he wanted to help. Great job.

Re: FDK: Investigate: Beckoning (1/12) CarrieRene #294785 01/07/23 08:53 PM
Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA Blueowl OP Top Banana
OP Blueowl Top Banana Joined: Jan 2019 Posts: 1,011 Likes: 21 Central/Eastern USA	Originally Posted by SuperBek What a wonderful scene with Superman at the hospital with the children. I read the first Act of this series, but I'll admit I'm not yet caught up with the rest. Nevertheless, I really enjoyed the start here, and I'm excited to see where you go with this!! hurries off to go read Acts 2 and 3.... -Bek Thanks . Hopefully reading this first part didn't spoil too many things . I hope you enjoy Acts 2&3 Originally Posted by bakasi Yay, the saga continues. I loved this first part, Clark talking to the children at the hospital. I liked how torn he was by his wish to help, knowing that it will cost him too much. Well done I'll admit, writing it had been a little rougher than I had expected. Half way through it we had had a little scare with my youngest. He finished chemo in April so he gets scans every three months now and that last scan had brought a false alarm. Of course, we hadn't known it then, so . . . yeah. Anyway, glad I did it justice. Originally Posted by Morgana Yay! Glad to see a new part in this intriguing series. Quote It was surreal to Lois. She never imagined herself being a house person. She had always envisioned herself living in an apartment in the city, but here she was, painting the walls of a home in a suburb on the perimeter of the city where she worked. The commute was a little longer, but considering everything, it was a fair trade. Better than fair, actually. It even had a perfect place to construct a secret closet, which Clark had built the first day they received the keys. No townhouse on Hyperion Drive? Lois a commuter? Yup, definitely continuing as an alternative universe. Like the paint race! SuperBek, you are in for a treat! Yeah, Lois now has a commute, although I imagine she doesn't have to deal with traffic like the average person . Glad you liked the paint race. I figured it's better than going through wallpaper samples :P Originally Posted by CarrieRene Wow, so sad yet heartwarming. The way he wants to help those children and how you showed us how much he wanted to help. Great job. Thanks ^_^ I imagine being unable to help might be harder for him than failing when he does try.

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