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Yes, I keep adding more parts. I swear I'm not doing it on purpose! I have an outline, but then it just expands!! I'm working on part 14 now....

Anyway, here is the next part: Feed

*Hands out tissues in case they're needed*

Thoughts?

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This was intense. I'm glad Clark was able to reach out for help. I hope that Bernie and General Burton find a way too get rid of the invaders. Perhaps with the help of some kryptonite?

Hope Clark will get help, soon


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Ahhh! I just got to read this after driving and gymnastics all day yesterday!

That was really intense. Ack, poor Clark. whinging

Glad to know he is still recovering between feeds and that he was able to reach out to... everyone that had been touched by his aura (?).

Looking forward to the next chapters...cuz he's gonna get help soon, right?? grovel

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Thanks for this post.
Really glad Clark is strong enough to communicate.
And nice to see, how many take part in wanting to rescue Superman.


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bakasi - Burton definitely has a plan in the making..... Help is coming wildguy

Superbek - His aura is pretty complex, but yes, for those who have been deeply touched by it, they're more sensitive to him overall. Next part should be up soon cool

sunshine6812 - Clark is made of some sturdy stuff, fortunately, though he's going to need to be. And yeah, some people are going to have their chance to help Superman laugh


Thanks for reading and reviewing, everyone! ^_^

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Ta’peel and his son are creeps.


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