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Please let me know what you think.


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You've captured Lois' voice perfectly here!

I'm totally loving this series!

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SQUEE!!!! Next one! Next one!!! smile1


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So great to see how the attraction goes both ways and that they just can't help it. They're perfect for each other :3

Can't wait for more.

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I’m just getting caught up. Thanks for another terrific chapter! It was nice getting Lois’s voice. I love this series and can’t wait for more!

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Thank you so much for taking this ride with me, guys. Initially, I wasn't planning to write this from Lois' POV. But now I'm glad that I did.

I'm already curious what you'll think of the next installment.


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Hi Barbara!
It’s already Friday…hmm…okay, Saturday, again!
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Lois was furious with Clark. He was going to blow the entire investigation just because of his stupid infatuation with his dog
He happens to like dogs. Nice dogs. Puppy dogs. Mad dogs. She should be happy it’s not the infatuation with the propitiator.

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She was Lois Lane - she didn’t make compromises and for good reason.
So…not good at this partner shtick?

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Her mouth ran dry and it took a conscious effort to drag her eyes away from him.
There might be a teensy weensy possibility that she might be attracted to him?

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She was here to investigate a crime, not her rookie colleague.
But he needs a good investigation. Otherwise, Cat might investigate the new meat, I mean coworker, herself.

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Lois whipped around, taking in the man’s leer as he let his gaze drift over her body and the skimpy yellow chicken dress she wore. A surge of anger filled her and she was about to give the sleazy guy a piece of her mind, when she remembered that she was undercover herself.
Yep, as a dance girl. Meant to entertain the sleazy patrons.

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The outfits were supposed to be revealing and Lois was sure that the male audience wasn’t going to have any complaints in that respect.
Patron 1: Those animals don’t appear to be anatomically correct.
Patron 2: Neither is Catwoman. Still nice to look at.
Patron 1: Point.

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What was it about Clark that turned her emotions into such a confusing jumble?
Hormones…

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How had he managed to get her attention? Her heart raced with excitement, but also something else.
See? Told ya she will wouldn’t like that.

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But Lois could almost feel how their gazes met, how there was that brief moment the world stopped turning just for them. Something was going on that she had no explanation for. It was some kind of magic.
Awww, clever!

Another week. Another sweet helping of magical fun smile1

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He was going to blow the entire investigation just because of his stupid infatuation with his dog. He was going to blow the entire investigation just because of his stupid infatuation with his dog.

LOL!! I love this line so much! lol

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Boy, did Clark look handsome in a tux. His white shirt stretched across a lean, muscular chest and his tightly fitted jacked did little to hide broad, muscular arms. Her mouth ran dry and it took a conscious effort to drag her eyes away from him.
Right?? *drool*

Eeeeeeee!!! I loved seeing Lois’ inner struggle with her feelings for and attraction to Clark!! love

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Originally Posted by DarthMichael
Another week. Another sweet helping of magical fun smile1

Thank you, Michael!

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Eeeeeeee!!! I loved seeing Lois’ inner struggle with her feelings for and attraction to Clark!! love

Aww, Sara, I'm so glad you like this. hyper


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Inwardly, she vowed to show the guy an example of her Taekwondo skills the next chance she got -- him and every other sleazebag she came across. Lois clenched her hands into tight fists and had a last look at Clark.

Classic Lois! Ready to knock out any scuzball who gets in her way. Meanwhile, she still has her eye on her rookie partner(s). Don't worry Lois, Houdini can more than pull his fair share of the weight.


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The three of them make a good investigative team, don't they?


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