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Here is my reply to Kerth Challenge #1.

Let me know what you think?


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Holy cow!!!
I wonder how that would have changed things!
Are you going to continue this? I hope so....

Really liked this ^_^

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...Nope. No. Uh uh. You do not get to end this here. This is *not* a place for a stopping point. Part Two please. Now. :p


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I agree with Blueowl and Queen of the Capes, more please!
You can’t leave it here! I love this! Thanks!

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(Morgana jumping up and down). Come back here please finish this! grovel


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A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
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Thank you all very much for your feedback. I forwarded your request for a sequel to my muse. Now, I await her reply.


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Hi Barbara!
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This was an interesting lesson in finding less wordy synonyms.
LOIS: What do mean ‘I won’t qualify '? I can most certainly keep it short and concise. I’m a reporter, I need to aim for fixed column inches. Stop laughing, I do not have an uncontrollable urge to express myself verbally!

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He always seemed to know when she left work.
NIGEL: The next time Mr. Luthor takes Ms. Lane to the opera, we need to replace her tracker’s battery.

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Though it was unnerving, he was probably just eager to spend time with her.
No, he’s not controlling.

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Would Lex’ kisses be as mind-blowing as Clark’s?
Yes, she’d want to blow his brains out.

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Maybe Lex was even going to be her happy ever after.
Does she like gilded cages?

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She approached him. “What are you doing in that alley?”
He’s drunk and had to pre-empt an airborne accident.

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He narrowed his eyes on her. "Are you reverting to blackmail now? Love me or I'll marry your enemy?"
Ouch!

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"Your enemy?" she croaked. "What is it between you and Lex?"
A woman came between them.
LOIS: shock
JUSTITIA: wave

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"If you want to help, find out who was behind this. You might be surprised." He pursed his lips and then, with a look of sheer concentration, he managed to lift off. Suddenly, Lois was alone with her thoughts.
LOIS: so… Bill Church and Intergang?

Thanks for that little reminder how the time flies by smile1

/mutters about Kerth challenges/

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Ack!!!! OMG this was awesome! The tension was great! And I wonder…in the sequel…will Lois realize that Superman was curt and fighting with her just like Clark had been??

More, please!

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Super late to this party! I’m glad part two is up as that’s an intriguing way to leave things hanging! Nice twist on the episode.


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