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YAY!! They're making progress ^_^
And he saved all those people :3

So happy and excited. And Lois once again demonstrating she's awesome.

Can't wait for more!

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*SQUEEEEEEE!!!!* I can't think of the last time a fic had me so on the edge of my seat, wondering if these two crazy kids would make it! Kudos for both the idea and its execution so far. smile


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Clark did great saving all those people. Nice touch having Clark leave his hand imprint on the train like Clark did in the pilot episode with the bus.

Lois was sweet staying with Clark like that. She knew he wouldn’t hurt her.

Thanks for another wonderful chapter! I love this story and can’t wait for next Friday!

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Originally Posted by Queen of the Capes
*SQUEEEEEEE!!!!* I can't think of the last time a fic had me so on the edge of my seat, wondering if these two crazy kids would make it! Kudos for both the idea and its execution so far. smile

Thank you, Queenie. I'm so glad you're enjoying this.


Originally Posted by Blueowl
YAY!! They're making progress ^_^
And he saved all those people :3

So happy and excited. And Lois once again demonstrating she's awesome.

Can't wait for more!

I like showing Lois better qualities. This Clark really needs her. Though sometimes she also makes his life difficult.


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Clark did great saving all those people. Nice touch having Clark leave his hand imprint on the train like Clark did in the pilot episode with the bus.

Lois was sweet staying with Clark like that. She knew he wouldn’t hurt her.

Thanks for another wonderful chapter! I love this story and can’t wait for next Friday!

Thanks, Songbird. I thought the derailing train from Man of Steelbars would be a a good moment for Clark to let out the inner hero.


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Hi Barbara!
Another week’s over dizzy
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What made him think he could stop a derailing train?
Well, he does perform feats of magic.

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But eventually even this noise died down, leaving only cheers of joy that assaulted his ears and slammed into his head with the force of a sledgehammer.
Looking forward to finding out if this counts as an official appearance of MagiKal.

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a now familiar and soothing sound that made his own heart flutter.
Awwww

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“They’re calling it a miracle,” she said quietly. “Nobody has any explanation how this train stopped after derailing.”
/Points at front of train/ The ‘Hand of God’ intervened.

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“Or it might just have been a jest, and seriously, how would anyone influence the weather?”
Giant flatulence? I hear Lex is full of hot air.

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But then he froze. What was he doing, sitting in the trailer with Lois only two feet from him, if that far.
Oh boy.

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“Don’t do this to yourself.” He felt her hand closing around his again. Had she somehow moved with superspeed?
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She trailed off and her eyes focused on his cheeks that had grown uncomfortably warm. “Wait a moment, don’t tell me, that food probably was from China, wasn’t it?”

Clark grinned. “Maybe. I guess I could-”
Cute!

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Her breathing sounded a bit labored, her voice was laced with pain and despair as she clung to his arm.
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!

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Clark caught himself on his hands and knees, but his focus never shifted from the soothing sounds that were uniquely Lois. And the prickling in the back of his neck faded.
Coincidence?

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He gave her a tentative smile. “For a hiccup, this wasn’t so bad.”
Coincidence? I think not.

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“I think I know what’s causing this heat wave. There has to be a leak in the nuclear power plant.”
How did he get that insight? Oh, by making one giant picture from the documents on the table he superimposed the various maps! clap

Another solid outing clap

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Originally Posted by DarthMichael
Another week’s over dizzy

I know the sentiment. The weekend always comes without warning.

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/Points at front of train/ The ‘Hand of God’ intervened.

He's a superhero not a soccer player. goofy

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How did he get that insight? Oh, by making one giant picture from the documents on the table he superimposed the various maps! clap

Another solid outing clap

Thanks, Michael. I'm curious what you'll say about the next installment, particularly the ending. evil


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Thanks, Michael. I'm curious what you'll say about the next installment, particularly the ending
Eeeep!

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Ahhh a rescue!!! Yay!!!

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Tension left his body, transforming into a smile that spread across his face and seemed even harder to contain than his occasionally out-of-control powers.

And this! I love this line!!!

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As he took her hand, Clark wondered whether it had been her presence that had dampened the hiccup?

He pushed the thought aside. There was no use losing himself in false hopes. It might have been just a fluke. Besides, there were more pressing matters.

GAHH don’t push that aside!! It’s truuuuue! Lois helped!!!

The only good thing about being behind is that I can go read the next one right now…

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That hiccup wasn’t so bad. Maybe they are starting to taper off? They are so in love! Lois was brave staying with him!

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Yay ^_^
So glad things are easing a bit smile
Can't wait for them to get to the bottom of it all so then they can spend more time really together :3

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Yeah, Lois seems to have a positive effect on the hiccups.

So glad you're liking this.


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At the start of the series, Houdini’s heartbeat helped soothe Clark and thereby helped end his hiccups sooner. But that just seems to have been Clark’s gateway drug… He’s now moved onto the strong stuff of Lois’s heartbeat. And all I can say to that is, “Aw….” smile


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