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A little more of Clark's side...


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If you feel so inclined as to post the next chapter right away, I would greatly appreciate that! lol

Ahhhh, poor Clark (again!!!)... Just enough information to *maybe* be helpful, but not enough, and he was pushed out of his body much too quickly...

Can't wait until tomorrow!!

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Thanks Bek. I greatly appreciate that you take time to leave feedback for every part. Yeah, Clark got yanked out of his body just when he didn't need it.


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Something knocked into Clark and he tumbled, losing his connection to the ground. A strong wave of dizziness blinded him and as he blinked his eyes open and everything swam back into focus, the world around him was once again pitch black.

Clark must REALLY be tired of being yanked back and forth.

I am going straight to the next two parts. Expect my comments on those parts soon. This really is a well-written story.


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Thank you so much, Morgana. I can't wait to see your comments on these parts.


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