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Here is the 6th Act of Investigate, chapter 1: Dangerous

Please let me know what you think ^_^

Yay, another installment in your Investigate series. Can't wait to find out where this is going. I loved this first part. It's interesting to see how Clark uses his abilities. Great he could help those kids, both as Clark and as Superman.

The conversation about how dangerous he is or could be was well done.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Me encanta ver las dos partes de Clark. Por un lado atrapa al secuestrador pero no quiere publicidad, solo fue un buen samaritano que estaba alerta e hizo lo correcto, por el otro cura a las personas quemadas y TIENE que permitir que haya medios de comunicación porque es su lado público y tiene más oportunidades de ayudar de esta forma.

Me encantó cómo enfrentó los miedos de la abuela de Mateo y su explicación de ser peligroso pero elegir no serlo.

Ahora a esperar pacientemente la siguiente actualización.

So happy Superman could help those burn victims with the use of his aura. Really enjoying this series and looking forward to seeing how Flare will compare with your previous stories!

It was interesting to hear the discussion about good dangerous and bad dangerous. Mateo and the others will have much to think about!

bakasi -- Thanks ^_^ I love including little kids in fics. I wish the show had included more kid interactions :3. And glad you liked the way he clarified being dangerous. At first I wasn't sure about it, but I felt it's really important, especially for what's coming in this fic.

CarolD -- Sabes, no me di cuenta completamente de esa yuxtaposición. A veces pienso que Clark simplemente escribe él mismo. Me alegro que lo hayas disfrutado ^-^

Morgana -- So glad the 'dangerous' bit came across so well. It's sort of the cornerstone of this fic. And thanks for reviewing

I liked the commentary on dangerous too. There are so many things in life that are dangerous, but also are blessings and useful. Cars, fire, power tools, electricity, and even things that are vilified like guns. These are all inanimate tools, sitting and powerless until claimed and used by people and hands either for good or for harm. It's the choice made by the person controlling it that causes the result, not the item itself.