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Chapter is here.

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Loved how Lois rummaged through her old life. She's got a place to stay now and clothes that won't make her stick out like a sore thumb. Can't wait to find out what happens next.


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Love all the details in this chapter, especially noting how everything has changed (the money, the hotel key, etc.)! Lois is as resourceful as ever!

Looking forward to the next!

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The attention to details in this part makes me realize how much has changed since the 90s. The red rotary phone, bedspread and most of all the television had me doing a mental checklist of my old apartment.

Hard to imagine Lois allowing Lex to upscale her wardrobe, but upon thinking about it, they were a power couple. Taking a tour through her old place we can see how much Lois had changed. She seems very lonely and the old apartment matches that solitude. Yep. She has to help get her life back!


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I missed responding to these!

Thanks for your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the walk through the apartment with all the 'retro' stuff. And yes, I was doing a checklist of what was in my home at the time and marveling at how far we've come.


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