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#29870 05/13/06 01:33 PM
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Great Job

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#29871 05/13/06 02:31 PM
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Ooh! mecry


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#29872 05/13/06 03:27 PM
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#29873 05/13/06 05:52 PM
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So. Another death-of-Lois fic.

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#29874 05/13/06 06:12 PM
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This was so well-written, and ultimately so, so heart-breaking.

And this, in particular:
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Reaching into his suit pocket, he pulled out two small rings. ... Staring at them, he knew they could never belong to another. He couldn’t keep them, he couldn’t sell them. It was all just too much to bear.
Ack! It just got me right *there.* Of course Clark can't keep them or sell them — he has to bury them with his wife, because her rings are such a raw, shattering reminder of what he's lost.

Thanks for sharing this amazing vignette on the boards.


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#29875 05/13/06 08:40 PM
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This is beautifully written. So sad! thumbsup

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#29876 05/13/06 10:55 PM
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As I said yesterday...

Nice work, Kelly! thumbsup Very emotional piece.

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#29877 05/15/06 06:29 PM
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*Blinks* whinging whinging

So beautiful, and sad. This part was really nice.

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Looking down at the rings she would never wear again, he walked over to the coffin and placed the rings on top. The words ‘until death do us part’ echoed in his head like a terrible song as he walked away.

She was worth more than that. She deserved forever and he wasn’t able to give it to her. Now she was gone.

He would never love again.
Very beautiful piece, kelly. I'm glad you enjoyed my video enough to make it into a fic. sloppy

Good Job!

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Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate!
Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate!
Sara: LMAO the *chocolate* isn't smeared in chocolate!
Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate
Sara: ROTFLMAO
#29878 05/16/06 08:31 AM
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Wow, Kelly!! mecry


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#29879 05/21/06 02:47 PM
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Ah thanks soooo much for all your wonderful comments. I am glad you all like the piece I wrote! I hope you all checked out the video as well by Rachel. Again thank you! smile laugh wink

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Walk to the edge.
Listen Hard.
Practice wellness.
Play with abandon.
Laugh.
Choose with no regret.
Continue to learn.
Appreciate your friends.
Do what you love.
Live as if this is all there is."
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