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2021 Kerth Challenge #10: "Red roses awaited her return. Would they be enough?"

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Wow. I really wonder how they will address what's happened with the world.... The aftermath of Superman appearing and Batman taking him, etc.. Wow. And Jimmy finding out....
I hope Clark recovers. This AU is intense shock

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So glad you're still keeping this up. I love this installment. And I second Blueowl on this, this AU is intense.


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With each chapter of this story I grow hopeful that Clark regains his memories.

Once again Lois proves to be the perfect wife for him.

It is good to see Bruce is still playing an important part in their live and Jimmy now knows everything!


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Ahhh, another installment and every single one just breaks my heart. 😭

I wonder how this will all resolve. I want to be hopeful... 😭💕💔💔💔

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Hi Mary!

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Previous Fic in Series: Disaster
Ooooooh the series continues hyper

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As soon as the phone started to ring, Lois’ hand flashed away from the steering wheel and started groping for her purse. It had fallen onto the floor of the passenger side, but she managed to grab it and fish the phone out before it rang again. The truck behind her blared its horn as she finally hit the button to answer. “Hey. What's happening?”
You know, I was expecting an accident.

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His reply was halting and uncertain. “Uh…I…think so? I think I've been arrested…”
He did not change into his costume on a public beach, did he?

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“What?!” More cars honked as she nearly missed her turn.
Oh, that’s a great Lois-POV description of Lois cutting across two lanes and almost causing a multi-car pileup.

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She could faintly make out Bruce's voice in the background. “You weren't arrested. We ducked into the police car so we could talk privately, remember?”
Oh boy.

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“Oh,” came Clark's hesitant reply. “Um, who are you?”

She couldn't quite hear Bruce's answer over the static.
BATMAN: The Bat. The brooding angel of darkness. The avenger of innocence lost. The worst nightmare you will ever have.
SUPERMAN: help

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“Fly?” she echoed. “You mean in an airplane?”

“I cannot confidently recommend the alternative,” Bruce replied.
Yes, flapping his cape while carrying Superman isn’t going to fly.

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Lois sighed. “A lot of questions, but no real answers. People are pretty sure that Superman is back from the dead somehow, but they can tell something's wrong.”
He’s a Ghul now. You should hide your damsels so he won’t visit them at night.
LOIS: He won’t.
SUPERMAN: help

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“Perry would be proud of him,” she continued, reaching for the door of the brownstone. “I just hope that no one else—What on Earth?!” Lois stared into the house, her jaw hanging open. Bouquets of red roses were piled onto the coffee table and in every corner, on every piece of furniture that had a scrap of reasonably flat surface. A few even lay on the couch. She gasped, and the air was completely perfumed with them.
Oh boy.

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It took her a moment to remember the phone in her hand. “Bruce, why is my house suddenly the inside of a florist’s shop?!”
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Bruce's deep sigh was barely audible over the static. “Because I could have sent him back as soon as he got here, but I didn't. And because I could send him back with Barry, but I won't. I chose the many over your husband again, and this time, I did it knowing who was waiting for him at home. I'm sorry, Lois.”
confused Umm…I think I missed something? huh What did happen with the roses? Did Bruce send them?

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Heartbreaking as always!! 😭😍😭😍😭😍😭


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It had fallen onto the floor of the passenger side, but she managed to grab it and fish the phone out before it rang again.
This is so much my every day life I did a double-take.

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It had been hours since Clark had left for Australia against the advice of his doctor, his parents, and his wife
Yikes!

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Now, every news outlet in the world was exploding with confused rumors about Superman, and getting accurate information had been difficult even for someone with Batman's phone number.
rotflol

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She couldn't quite hear Bruce's answer over the static.
Bet that was a doozy.

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“...I had to tell Jimmy the truth.”
Oooooh. That's good. But likely also a heck of a thing to learn now.

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“Perry would be proud of him,” she continued, reaching for the door of the brownstone.
My heart just imploded. No idea I had such a soft spot for this storyline, but thank you for helping me discover it!

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She gasped, and the air was completely perfumed with them.
That's an absolutely perfect detail.

And Bats has a heart in the end. whinging

This series really hits so hard, and this story was such a fun, exciting, comedic entry. The way you so skillfully maintain that tone while dealing with a completely lost Clark and through-the-roof anxious Lois is truly an amazing tightrope to walk. I'm glad the muse keeps popping it into your brain.


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