Yeah, I know what it's like to try to write in English when the smartphone is set up to German. When I started writing fanfic in English, I had been out of school for a couple of years. I have learned so much since then.
I love the two Loises and how they bicker with each other. And, yikes, one of them has his powers now. I wonder if they still are the same woman or if one is Lois' more aggressive side and the other her tender one.
It reminded me from the 90s when Superman was split into red and blue. Lois nearly went crazy with two Clarks bickering with each other. Imagine two Loises.
Are you sure this story is not on the wrong side of the boards? Clark seems to have some ideas...
Andreia
"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."
Lois deepened the kiss, sliding her tongue into her partner’s mouth and wrapping her arms around his neck. The kiss intensified until the elevator came to a halt. Clark pulled away, slightly dazed, with a look of regret. Lois whispered a promise in a breath that only her super husband could hear:
- Later...
Clark took Lois’s hand and they exited the elevator.
My goodness! What a way to start story and the work day.
Morgana
A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.
Just caught up with this fic. I loved how they supported each other and how the two Loises didn't end up in a big drama. There was some tension, sure, but for the most part they dealt well with the awkward situation. I thought it was funny that Lois' personality was split, too, and that Ultrawoman ended up with all her insecurities.
Clark seems to have some ideas... 
