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Lois has, with the help of a few friends really gotten herself involved in quite the case.

Comments, rocks and constructive thoughts are always appreciated! peep


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You want rocks? Why?

I just love this chapter. The health insurance fraud is a chilling scenario. You described it so well. I'm glad Lois has people looking out for her - Perry, Henderson, Bobby and now Paul, apparently. I wonder what his role is going b to be.

What is it Clark is not telling Lois?


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Glad to see that Lois has people looking out for her while Clark is away. It would be very lonely if she had to face his absence alone. sad Poor Clark sounds so sad. mecry

Paul? shock What is he doing at the Daily Planet? spider

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Thanks for the comment!

Lois has friends, but she was so overwhelmed by ...everything that she crawled into a shell and shut the door after her. It isn't strange that it takes a "love letter" from far away to knock open the door and pull her out.

The insurance fraud investigation is impossible for her to resist and yes, it is a chilling scenario.

Yeah, Paul, what is he doing here? huh

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Thanks for another great chapter! The plot definitely thickens with the health insurance fraud and Intergang. Lois is thankfully back being the best investigative journalist in New Troy but I hope she hasn’t bitten off more than she can chew. I know she took care of herself before Superman came on the scene but she needs to be extra careful. I wonder if Paul is somehow the protection that Henderson and Reed planned.

Clark seemed sad. Being separated from everyone he loves is heartbreaking. I hope he comes home soon but I’m sure it’s a long ways off.

I’m hoping I can read more tonight. I love this story! Thank you!


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