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FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) #300768 10/14/24 07:37 PM
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OP JadedEvie Hack from Nowheresville J Joined: Apr 2023 Posts: 298 Likes: 45	Thanks to everyone who's read this far! We'll get into the meat of the emotional journey's climax in the next chapter. Also, I couldn't resist that little cameo there at the beginning! Not my favorite character, but I always wondered what a run-in with her would be like if we didn't have the love triangle angle. Please feel free to send any constructive criticism my way! And if you especially like any particular bits, I'm always thrilled to know! As always, thanks to Sara for her a fantastic beta-job - as I always edit again and again (and again!), any errors here are mine. The story continues here: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) And the full index is here (Mike, thank you for all the updates!): Undercover Reporter: Resurrection Index Thank you for reading! Kerth nominations are opening on March 9th! 🏆TOC for Kerth Awards 2025 Posts🏆

Re: FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) JadedEvie #300771 10/16/24 01:13 PM
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bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,690 Likes: 59 Germany	Yay, they've got a plan and it even sounds half-way reasonable. Can't wait for them to fix this. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) JadedEvie #300781 10/18/24 07:03 AM
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Ultra Woman Pulitzer Joined: Aug 2004 Posts: 2,596 Likes: 12 Brazil - RS	Lois has a plan to save Clark. So glad she's managing to wear down his defenses. I can't wait to see him back to his old life. Andreia "My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell." ~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15

Re: FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) JadedEvie #300801 10/20/24 10:11 AM
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Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,849 Likes: 45 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote “You’re sure about this?” “Yes,” Lois said with certainty. “Everything is there. His accounts, the money trail, photos of the diamonds and guns -- both here and leaving the Congo -- photos of him meeting with his liaison and then that same guy meeting with guerrilla fighters later, the shipping manifests, signed statements from dock workers on both ends, the air traffic control records from his private plane. There’s even a recording of him plainly planning to double time his buyer and sell to both sides! Plus St. John’s confession is on tape.” Hmmm, it takes time to crack this kind of a case. Such investigations are best done from the inside, preferably by a 'mole' that no one will be suspicious of because the person is 'deceased'. Yup, I can definitely see this working for all concerned. Now if a certain investigative reporter could get past his bad case of lunkheadness... Quote “So I’d been wearing a bullet-proof vest for over a year?” The skepticism in his voice had shot up another notch. “I think it might have started after the Dragonetti heist,” she said thoughtfully. “Having the bad guys catch you off guard at home base would have been startling. That would make the most sense.” She has you there Clark. People are aware you are mild mannered. Last edited by Morgana; 10/20/24 07:06 PM. Reason: Edits Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) JadedEvie #300813 10/20/24 07:19 PM
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Songbird Beat Reporter S Joined: Jul 2020 Posts: 413 Likes: 42 Southern California	The plan sounds plausible. Lois just needs to get Clark fully on board but she’s wearing him down. He needs to show that he has an IQ higher than a walnut. That was very funny! It’s good that Jonathan and Martha support it. They want their son back like Lois wants her Clark back. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Thank you! I love this story!

Re: FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) JadedEvie #300814 10/21/24 06:51 AM
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Aurore Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Sep 2013 Posts: 113 Likes: 2 France	Wouahou! I just read all the parts in one Time...and I love this story. I'm eager to read the last two parts.

Re: FDK: Undercover Reporter: Resurrection (15/17) JadedEvie #300828 10/24/24 06:52 AM
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Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,120 Likes: 41	Hi Evie! Quote If he didn’t know he was being recorded, it’s inadmissible.” Doesn’t that change if Lois is no longer able to testify personally? LOIS: CLARK: You know, if she were dead? CLARK: DA Clemons: Quote My office doesn’t usually work with reporters.” The way the woman said ‘reporter’ made it sound like a four-letter word. Oh, look, who’s already whetting her claws. Maybe someone should tell Lois that The Blonde doesn’t like vigilantes? Quote “Is she for real?” The man smirked. “This is Lois Lane,” he said laconically. “That doesn’t hold much stake with me,” replied the assistant district attorney, “She’s on the level,” Henderson said, this time with no trace of a smirk. Indeed. If you can’t trust Superman’s paramour, whom can you trust? MAYSON: First, being the tightman’s illicit lover doesn’t instill much trust. Second, I don’t trust tights-wearing vigilantes, which invalidates the supposed trust root. You could even go as far as to say she’s trying to pander an apple from a rotten tree. Quote Honestly, what was it with this woman? She’s ticked off that The Superman Groupie got her boy toy killed. Quote But she wasn’t going to let a snippy civil servant get to her tonight. Tonight – or, well, this morning – she and Clark would finally be writing their page 8 story. She hoped. And she had a feeling she’d need all her reserves of patience for that potentially life-changing endeavor. I had no idea that the Daily Planet reprints dear-playboy letters on page eight. Quote I’m only here now to let you get your ducks in a row so that you aren’t caught with your pants down after missing the biggest criminal in Metropolis.” Like Lois was caught with her wedding dress up? Quote “It’s got less alliteration than a lot of our headlines.” Quote She wrinkled her nose. “Perry’s pedantic penchant for snappy soubriquets sometimes suggests sensationalism.” Oh you had fun with that one! Quote “Clever,” he said drolly. Clark thought so too. Quote This is the second billionaire in a year that decided he was above the law and above the rest of us, too,” Maybe they should investigate the vigilante playboy billionaire and his clepto catamour. Quote Chow pushed an entire country toward civil war and economic collapse for money that would have only marginally supplemented his current millions! He’s probably only just building up his weapons programs so he can also support larger nation state warfare. Give him time. Quote The better this story reads, the bigger difference it can make. The title can’t be campy.” “Dr. No wannabe and butler caught by Nancy Drew”? Quote And as much as she loved what the spandex did for his figure, nowadays she was always eager to see him in anything else. See? Too much of a good thing can be a bad thing. And we wouldn’t want Lois to establish a fascination with Hawaiian prints or kevlar-reinforced latex, now would we? LOIS: if he doesn’t like civilian clothing, he can always sit there in his undies. Or without them. Quote Plus, she supposed, it wouldn’t hurt for him to be wearing Clark Kent’s clothes right now, since she was about to dig her heels in about bringing Clark Kent back. CATWOMAN: I once dug my heels into Batman’s back. He decided he preferred dates instead of fights after that. (Also, I’m so glad autocorrect did not suggest “dates instead of figs” here.) Quote “Did we just make Bruce Wayne the richest man in the world?” I’m not sure. Just because he’s arrested doesn’t mean Chow looses his money. Also, Batman’s gonna be insufferable now. GREEN LANTERN: I don’t see the difference. Quote “Then we can ask him where he went all those times he disappeared on you. I don’t trust millionaires anymore. They’re always hiding something.” Makes you wonder, isn’t Superman strictly speaking also a millionaire, what with the whole foundation? Plus, there’s the whole crown estate thing he’s got going on. LOIS: And when did I say Superman isn’t also hiding a naughty little secret? MAYSON: I distrust Superman, too. TRASK: /passes business card/ We meet every Tuesday on Bessolo Blvd. There’s free coffee and tin foil. Quote . “I think you mean ‘racked’ here, not ‘wracked’ with a ‘w.’” “No, Clark,” she said, her voice quietly resolute. “You meant ‘wracked?’” he asked, pausing his hands over the keys and re-reading the screen. “Not that,” she said with frustration. Are you sure she isn’t racking her brain on whether she should wreck his brains? Quote “I am not submitting this story without your name on the byline.” And on page seven: talking to the dead. A beginner’s lesson by Lois Lane. Bring your Ouija board! Quote She went on, ignoring his interjection, “—and I knew that you were alright. I even knew that you were going to Africa.” PERRY: yodelidado! Quote heartbreak like the one he’d experienced by giving up Clark Kent’s terrible ties. CLARK: But I loved them. They attracted so many blondes! Quote Her lips curved in a moue of distaste at the thought before she said, “A bullet-proof vest.” Or a Zippo lighter. Quote And why exactly was I wearing a vest on that particular night?” he asked skeptically. He was out with Lois. She tends to get shot at. Quote “Wouldn’t you wear a bullet-proof vest on all your investigations with the notoriously danger-prone Lois Lane?” I’m so sorry! I swear I did not read ahead. Quote Burrows died two months ago.” Yes, his frog ran out. Quote “But there is no vest.” What about the one Lois was wearing when Clark wasn’t around. It got a bunch of use. Also, strictly speaking, vests are the same as helmets, you’re supposed to replace them after they have been used. Quote I just – I can’t risk my parents. They gave me everything. I can’t repay them this way, by taking chances with their safety.” He does not remember the baseball bat, does he? Quote “Have you asked them?” she asked, watching his face carefully. No, because he doesn’t agree with their expected answer. Quote In fact, this long after the start of their usual argument, she’d be standing over her kitchen sink, cursing Clark’s name into a carton of rocky road. Did you ever tell us what Lois is wearing tonight? Maybe he’s…distracted? Quote After all, just because she’d learned caution over the last year didn’t mean that extended to patience with her boyfriend when he was behaving with the IQ of an absolute walnut. Quote You made the choice for all of us last time. Don’t we get to decide, now that we have another chance?” ***** Plus, he gets to see Lois naked. Does that help? CLARK: Two more parts! And one’s already up Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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