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#30105 05/25/06 12:38 AM
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Ooh, the plots thicken! Very nice part. And Clark's first-person POV is still so perfect!

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The water eddies between us as she moves to stand behind me. "Hmm. What about here?" she asks, drawing her fingers across my back. My mental 'Yellow Pages' flips to "Getting Some" and the box fades dramatically in importance.
I almost fell out of my chair! Such a male viewpoint and so very funny!

So Lucas really was from Krypton? Wow! What's in the box? Will Lois manage to seduce both herself and Clark before they leave the dig? And what about the pictures? I know we haven't heard the last of them.

Whoa. Just had a wild thought. Does the box Lois was threatened with have anything to do with the box Clark has now? That would be wild, indeed.

Keep up the great work! I'm eager to read the next chapter!


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Hi,

Great part. hyper


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