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Great part...

Ok, I guess this is something freudian and i just wanted to use these little guys above:
The right word is question mark, not question tag.
Just the proof for my great English

Concerning the more....as soon as I can. Maybe a thunder- storm won't let me this afternoon.

I've been really busy writing and so have been lousy on my fdk lately. Sorry for that. Bad FoLC, bad.

I wanted you to know that I'm following your story with interest. I am glad to see that you put spaces between your paragraphs in this post. That made it much easier to read.

I also wanted to suggest something - have you thought about asking someone to "beta read" for you? They can take a look at your story first, before you post it, to help you with things like language and punctuation. I'm not offering to Beta, though, sorry, I would if I could but I simply have too much going on right now. I did see that Ambar and Madamebutterfly had offered their services. So if you want a beta, you might ask one of them.

But I really love this story. You portray the *feelings* of the characters so well.

Keep it up! Can't wait to read the next part.

-- MR

I wouldn't worry about it. I hadn't even noticed the 'question tag' until you mentioned it. I had to go back and look. You'd be surprised what us native English speakers manage to do. In my case English was my best subject in school - both high school and college - and I find myself making some whopper mistakes that I don't find until after I've posted. Talk about head bangs.

Well, I have been thinking about a beta reader. But this time I didn't want it. I think I wanted to share this first story with my best friend, who isn't a native speaker either. But I'm planning a next story and I will definitely need a beta-reader.

Hi,

Great part.

I'm enjoying your story very much, and I like your angle in writing this moment of L&C life.
Another great story on the boards!

simona