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Hi,

Great part. I think Danny is trying to do his best as a single father. I think he is good father!


He should keep his memories it will be good for the family to have a male nurse that knows the secret and he seems to be interest in science it will good for Bernie.

Danny needs Clark as friend to help him be a better father. A male man that he can talk too, Danny seems to be a lonely guy with heavy weight on his shoulders.

It is good for father and daughter relation.


Get back Here!


More ASAP, please.

MAF

I don't have much time here, Nancy, but I really liked this part. It intrigued me. I thought that Danny really shaped up, and I think, and hope, that he can be trusted with the secret. Like Maria, I hope that his knowledge can bring him and Jenni closer.

I really liked *how* Danny found out about Zared! What a shock to the poor boy to find that the nurse looking after him in his superhero guise is his pregnant girlfriend's father!!!

I liked how you used the Kryptonian telepathy here, too. But, honestly Nancy, *don't* let Clark wipe other people's memories. It was plenty bad enough what he did to Lois in Superman II. That movie put me off Superman for ten years, you know!

I was *really* intrigued to hear that Clark knows of two Kryptonian-Humans whom we haven't met. I would personally love it if one of them had been Hanna, Batman's daughter! But I guess not. These Kryptonian-Humans are the products of rape, of male Kryptonians raping human females, and that certainly rules out the possibility that Hanna would be half Kryptonian. But I loved that suggestion that she might not actually know that Batman is her father!

Great chapter, Nancy! I really, really liked it.

Ann

Gracious sakes, TOC. You are too good - just too intuitive. I'll leave it at that....

I guess both of you can see that I've used ideas from Superman franchises other than L&C.

Once again thanks for your comments.

Oh, Maria - Clark was at S.T.A.R. labs for a post surgery check-up when the docs decided he needed blood.

From Part 11

Originally this said he had a check-up at the lab, but I changed it to a check-up at S.T.A.R. labs so it would be easier to understand.