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Love it! I couldn't comment on your British-ism's but I like that name. That's definitely true, because what is a boffin??


What does Tentacles mean:

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He tossed a twenty on the tablet to pay for his uneaten meal and a generous tip, and said, “C’mon, Tentacles, let’s go look for a boffin in need of a rescue.”
Am I just forgetting something from earlier in the story?


I loved Bill's tongue-tied reaction to Slayer Lois. I also liked her reaction.

And poor Bill doesn't know about his heritage. I can't wait to see what happens with the revelation from Clark.


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Re: "Tentacles" -- as in Tentacled Alien Monster. Not that Bill actually HAS Tentacles but Spike has a pet name for pretty much everyone that he likes and a few enemies. (Niblet, Peaches, Soldier Boy ...) He knows Bill's an alien and he's going to razz him about it on general principles

Maybe I need another name ...

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Love it! I couldn't comment on your British-ism's but I like that name. That's definitely true, because what is a boffin??


What does Tentacles mean:

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He tossed a twenty on the tablet to pay for his uneaten meal and a generous tip, and said, “C’mon, Tentacles, let’s go look for a boffin in need of a rescue.”
Am I just forgetting something from earlier in the story?


I loved Bill's tongue-tied reaction to Slayer Lois. I also liked her reaction.

And poor Bill doesn't know about his heritage. I can't wait to see what happens with the revelation from Clark.

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Well, Tentacles made me think octupus or big bug...

Anxiously awaiting the next part..


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Loved this part.

One thing, I thought that vamps, in the buffyverse, could hear/feel the blood coursing through an individual. If so, Spike should have been able to pick up on Bill's change in blood pressure when he sees Lois.

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I didn't like this...for the first half of the first chapter. Ignoring canon, making Lois a slayer, I didn't like it...until Clark showed up and I realized that it was actually an alternate universe. After that it grew on me quickly. I just found this story today and I like it!

As for the tentacled thing...I think that's a perfect spikism.

Looking forward to the next installment!


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