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#32268 08/30/06 05:05 AM
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Hi,

Great part. hyper


Maria D. Ferdez.
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Thanks for your feedback, Maria!

Oh, the 'forget' worked - just very badly!

And, yes, Mayson thinks they are in a relationship.


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I don't havetime for long feedback, but I still love your story. I laughed so hard at the end when it was obvious that Mayson think she and Clark are involved. Clark deserved that! I didn't like when he erased her memory, so he really deserved that! Very well done.

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Thank you Poussin. It should be interesting to see how he gets out of that one, eh?


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~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

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