I just got through reading all 7 parts.
(my back's all better now, hooray! but I didn't feel like working on my story, so I read this instead. hehehe!)
I'm glad the sections are labelled cause at first it was really confusing. I sometimes thought I knew which Clark it was and turns out a few paragraphs later I was wrong. *lol* It's a lot clearer with the labelling, so thanks for that.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm really enjoying this! Made me laugh out loud several times - there are some really awesome bits of dialog in there.
I have to say I love Tempus as a villain so I'm glad you've got him in there. hehe! And you're doing a great job with his character!!!
Loving it so far!
Looking forward to the next parts.
