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#32902 09/23/06 04:57 PM
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Ooohhh... Lisa didn't believe the Spike was a good guy. I'm glad she missed.

So I have a question. Silliness intended. What happened to the pizza and the hot wings? laugh

Now what are they going to do about Spike's need to feed?


~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
#32903 09/25/06 05:19 AM
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Another nice section - Clark seems to be taking a lot on trust, given that he knows what Spike is, but maybe he saw more than we think.


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#32904 09/25/06 10:23 AM
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Short piece, but powerful. Like Marcus, I wonder how much Clark actually saw. But if he saw more than just the very end, why didn't he intervene? Could it be that he's not certain of Spike's good intentions? Or maybe he's been affected by his exposure to these magical beings and doesn't completely trust his own judgement? There may be much more here than meets the reader's eye.

Short chapter, short feedback. Like that old saying, big feet, big - shoes.


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- Stephen King, from On Writing

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