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Great part Bakasi!

You show some real insight into both Lex's and Lois' characters, and your presentation is very good. I liked Lex's thoughts about how to trap Lois but not scare her off by acting too quickly or forcefully--the frog metaphor was great! :p And then having the two inner Loises fight was good too, very Lois, I can definitely see her thinking that way.

Also, an innovative approach to "the Clark Kent problem." Having Lex tell her such an outright lie will definitely move this story along to (hopefully) some nice angsty scenes! Because, as Lois said, this lie is easily proven to be just that.

Excellent, can't wait for more!

I've been a little stumped for words, because Lex Luthor is... well, not my favorite character, you know? I don't love to hate him, I just hate him. And I can't stand that Lois believes herself to be in love with him! I think that this is the hardest thing to accept for me in the entire LNC canon: I mean the idea that Lois was prepared to marry Lex. And - <sniffle> - I hate when Lois is being galactically stupid!

But I agree with absolutely everything that Ultragirl said. Thank you, Ultra, for so excellently pointing out all the great things about this new chapter of Seven Seconds! I particularly liked the argument between the two Loises myself. Of course, I was rooting for Investigative Lois all the way!

I'm personally very, very much looking forward to more Lois and Clark interaction. Will Lois accuse Clark of being married? What will he say to her? Is it even possible that Lex will have tried to plant a faked marriage certificate somewhere, supposedly proving that Clark is married?

Looking forward to the next chapter, where we will hopefully see more of Lois and Clark! (And less of Luthor - but I'm not sure you will grant me that wish, will you, Barbara?)

Ann

Dear Ann,

I will most definitely grant you that wish. Do you seriously think that I will write about a Lex - Lois relationship? Where will be the fun in this when one of the partners is dominant?

Yippee! I'm still following this Bakasi! It's a really cool/different idea...

And I'm with Ann, I think Lex has thought this through enough and is smart enough - that he will plant a fake marriage certificate for Lois to find.

(That and the fact that I remember your question in the fanfic related section not too long ago )

Looking forward to part 3...

Great part, Bakasi!


Evil Man!!
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Ooooohhh...... Wicked
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Oh, what a wicked web....
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I like this - nice.
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Ah, dear UltraGirl, surely Lex would not make the lie so easily disproven, would he? He's an evil, evil man!!
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Yes, I agree with Ann... If ever Lois was galactically stupid it was when it came to Lex.

I completely agree with Ann (we have alike opinions about L&C - and Luthor, havent't we?)

Bakasi, I'm glad we'll have more Lois and Clark interaction. In my opinion she was galactically stupid asking to Lex why Clark hates him. He would never say the truth, of course. :rolleyes: But I'm looking forward for her finding out the truth and seeing through Luthor's façade.

More, please.

Andreia