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I loved the relevation scene between Claire and Trace. It sontinued completely differently than I had anticipated, and it was just great.

That is something I'd call a wonderful non-revelation! Even Clark and Lois themselves couldn't have done better! )


Hush! The whole household is listening! Big family is watching you!

Or did she simply hide it well? We'll never know, will we?



Do women in labour really act like that? I mean, she was there, too, and she - hopefully - enjoyed herself, too. So why is it all *his* fault?

Oh, my! How many more people will you turn into co-conspirators? And how many more ideas for a relevation scene do you have? They're getting better and better!

What else is there to say?

Uh-oh! That's gonna be interesting! What evil schemes does a certain writer have in mind?


And your not quite nfic-sequence (it was definitely more than just one act!). Beautiful. Exciting. Surprising. Funny, even. Marvellous.

That strong, huh? And at what a distance! (Stars and sunsets, indeed!) Wow!

Yes, she is. Don't miss Trick or Treat - The Littlest Hero. The story is about Lara and is the story you suggested.

Oh, yes, they definitely can be like this. I worked in labor and delivery and this is fairly normal during the stage right before delivery. They are often irrational.

By this time, Jenni and Zared were back home, but they were both still thinking about stars and sunsets.

Wow! Two for one today? Coolness!!

yay! I think it's so sweet that they should go out together.

Shamed? They don't know the first thing about Clark, do they? hehe! Poor K'al always thinking he needs to be a certain way - I wish he could relax a little while he's on Earth.

So did we, Clark... so did we!

LOL! That little bit there is just priceless!

That *totally* got me in a fit of giggles! hehe!

Looks like there's another couple in the forming, eh? Cute!!

For the one-millionth time... I adore this kid. She's just absolutely precious! That whole conversation is so endearing!


Did I mention how precious this kid is?

..I'm not all too sure I want to read that last scene that starts in Clark's room. Do I? I'll have to come back for it anyway, cause I actually have to start working... my coffee break's been over for 10 minutes already. LOL!

Oh, come on, read it! It's clean (it's PG13, after all). You'll want to read the part about Lara anyway.

Just read it now. 'ya know, sometimes I wonder how the hell I manage to be able to read nfic, cause that little part of your story had me all blushing and embarassed in a matter of seconds... I definitely should not have read *that* at work! LOL!

Awwww!!! poor sweet little thing. My heart's totally breaking now!


I swear, if anyone hurts her.... grrr!!!

Looking forward to the next part, Nancy! Nice work on this one!

Nancy,

What other descriptive words can I say but:

Stuart

Hi,

Great part!

Thanks, guys - Olympe, Lara, SNL, and Maria!!


I'm not tellin' yet. All I'll say is that he is a mean, nasty guy. A Super villain in the making. (Hint: He's 17.)

I'm so pleased that you would like to quote my whole story.

And Lara really is a cute kid, isn't she?


Well, is she hid it well, she's hidden from me, too. Of course, being as how I'm the author....


Yes, she has evil planned.

Don't know if he can relax or not. We'll have to see....


Hehehehe....

No. Nobody has or will hurt her. Clark was just checking her room to be sure since she didn't want to go back in there. But that wouldn't be unusual to want to avoid the room that you had a terrible dream about a Green monster, would it?

Guess he figures Jimmy has known for years so maybe it will be okay. I'd imagine he'd be more worried about Cat than Trace. Trace will protect Pixie at all costs.

Not quite sure I understood this. If you are referring to the mutilator, he is safely tucked away and won't get out of jail. He'll be mentioned again, but that's about it. Clark's nightmare was just that - a nightmare. It wouldn't be unusual to have a nightmare after being so brutally attacked.

You're good, Maria! Yes, she did. Of course, her dream lasted longer than her father's did. I actually had something in the original version about her picking up his dream, but I took it out. More about that later.

A super villain with the ability to (nearly) brainwash a telepathic Krypterran? What sort of mind magic does that guy possess? <shudder>

It's not as if there could be anything hidden from you, is it? (If it weren't for you not knowing, I dfinitely could explain how she managed to do that...)

Same here. But then, the Cat you pictured is not that much like the gossip columnist from season 1. Perhaps she'll just try getting her hands on his backside (not unlike Jenny) - 'for good old time's sake' or something like that.


Oh, so Lara merely captured Clark's dream. I thought that both were sharing an experience that happened somewhere else, the mutilator being escaped and so on, but this version is at least equally good.

As you know, Nancy, I'm the world's greatest Lois fan. And when I saw that there would be sex in this part - Clark and Caitlyn sex, that is - I felt, at first, that I just couldn't read this cahpter at all. But then I knew that I wanted to see Rya's baby being born, and anyway - I was almost sure that there would be some good stuff about Clark's children. So I decided to read most of this, but there was no way I would peek inside Clark and Caitlyn's bedroom.

I really like Trace! And I'm glad he knows about Clark's identity, and about Claire's identity, too - I mean, that she is the Purple Pixie! and I'm so glad she has broken up with Alex - but of course, I'm sure we haven't seen the last of him!

This sounds a little worrying. Is there a real problem with Jon's health?

Aaaaaaawwww, Nancy. Thanks!!!!!

And then Lara talks to Clark about sex, and it's absolutely adorable... but since it was about the sex that Clark was going to have with Caitlyn, I couldn't enjoy her questions very much. Well, Nancy, you know that Hangup is my middle name.

This is really funny.

Wonder where they are going?

Isn't she irresistible? You know, if I had been Amanda, I probably would have told her. But of course Clark needed to tell her that there are questions you really shouldn't ask....

Oh-oh!!!

Wow, Nancy, you give us one emotional jolt after the other all the time, it seems!

So Clark will have to change clothes and show himself as the other him. Well, it's good thing he's healing and beginning to look better, or he couldn't really pass for Superman.

Well, no nice guy in his right mind would want to rule a society like that one.

I love Ben's awe and excitement here, and how Chloe tells him to calm down, because Superman isn't such a big deal.

But then Ben makes her see that Superman really is a very big deal after all! That's lovely!

Well, Ben doesn't know yet, but Trace certainly does. And Clark has to put up with the idea that more and more people know about him.

Poor Clark! That was embarrassing.

But I love how Clark can give K'al this fatherly bit of advice.

Aaahh, K'al, stupid boy! And poor Clark.... Really, as I said, more and more people know about his identity by the minute!

Doctor/patient confidentiality.... I really like it.

Hmmmm. Los began his studies when he was thirteen years old, and now, at eighteen, he is a healer already. You don't get much of a childhood on Krypton, I guess. Rya is also a bit young to be a mother.... But then, Jenni is exactly Rya's age, and I never complained about her pregnancy, did I?

Me either, Jonathan, but I guess it's just me and you. (And I'm pretty sure Caitlyn will make a believer of you.)

Aaaaaaawwwwwww!!!! Adorable!!!!

Sounds cute, Nancy, but what's a 'onesie'?

I'm glad it's a girl, and I'm glad they are not upset because it's not a boy.

Adorable!!!!

I love this! And I love the fact that Jon and Hannah can't refuse the honor of being Lady Jonna's honorary parents!

Oh, but... as I scrolled down a little more, I saw that Clark was kissing Caitlyn passionately, so I quickly had to escape. So, no, I couldn't read the end of this. Bet I missed something important, too.

Anyway, until I reached the part where Clark was kissing Caitlyn, I really, really enjoyed this chapter!

Ann

Oh, Ann, what is wrong with Caitlyn?
I liked her from well, if not the very beginning, then from the moment she met Clark's family.

Obviously, she has a good heart that is even big enough for Clark's numerous offspring.
Okay, she is a bit of a workaholic scientist, but Lois' 'workaholicism' equaled hers at least. Clark should be used to that by then!

So, why don't you like her? Because you believe that Clark belongs to Lois, and only to her? And that he has to live unhappily ever after her untimely death? Don't be so hard on him!

Thanks for all the feedback, guys!

No. Just a jerk messing with a 15 year old's mind. He didn't brainwash her. He just played on insecurities already there - like her being upset about the red hair and her not thinking she was pretty. That kind of thing. No 'mind magic' as in telepathy involved.
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No, she won't give anything away. She doesn't want Clark mad at her because she hopes he will help advance her career. But she will be all 'ga ga'.
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No, we haven't.
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Nope. The day before - June 7. I didn't want the baby to have the same birthday.
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No, he didn't hypnotize her. Reference my answer above about him messing with the 15 year olds insecurities. I don't know why that is about rape. Perhaps because it is so... invasive.
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Yeah, that Meowoof has the whole household - including the two dogs wrapped right around her paw. Maybe she can even get the stuck up cat, Sapphire to come around. (Sapphire, by the way, is based on my own stuck up cat.)
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Let's just say... angst. Remember that Los is royalty. And even if Mari proved to be Lord Nor's daughter, she would be from a disgraced house. (She isn't Lord Nor's daughter.)
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Yes. I've already established that he was sick a lot as a kid.
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I started to have Amanda tell her, but I then I decided Clark should interrupt instead.
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I hope that's good. I think it is!
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Even from Clark's short influence, they have changed a lot.
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Yeah, that's what happens with a large family....
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Embarrassed Clark is so cute.
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Life is hard on New Krypton.
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A onesie is a one piece outfit that goes on like a t-shirt and snaps at the crotch. Very handy for babies. And who would have thought such a common item would so please K'al and Rya?
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Yeah, you missed Lara's nightmare. You need to read that part. That's the part I said to pay close attention to. (It has something to do with the story Trick or Treat.)
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Ah, Olympe, I wished Ann liked Caitlyn, too, but I've come to understand her.... You see, Ann is a Lois fan.

Yes, Olympe, that's how I see Clark. Because, you see, I've been a Superman fan for one year, namely, in 1968. But since 1969, I've been a Superman and Lois fan. That is, for 37 years I've thought of Superman as the man who belongs to this one woman. I probably would have lost interest in Superman altogether around 1969, if I hadn't become convinced that he is destined to love Lois. And I did lose interest in him in 1980, after I had seen Superman II, where he rejected Lois. A small part of me retained the idealized picture of Superman, however, where he loves Lois. Then in 1990, Superman asked Lois to marry him in the comics, and I was totally hooked again. And since then, I've loved Superman because of his superpowers, his nobility, his double identity and his love for Lois!

So what's wrong with Caitlyn? Absolutely nothing, except that I can't accept her as Clark's love and sex partner because she isn't Lois. As I said, Hangup is my middle name... but please bear in mind what kind of Superman fan I am before you totally judge me.

Ann

Ah, yes, Ann, we have had some spirited discussions, haven't we??

Did you go back and read the end - the part about Lara's nightmare?

No, I didn't. Do you think I can do that without accidentally sneaking a peek at the Clark and Caitlyn sex?

Ann

Okay, I read it! I read it from the end, so I did manage to miss the sex. Green monster, hmmmm?

And Lara knows that Jon isn't feeling well. That really worries me. You can't make him too sick, Nancy!

Ann

@ TOC: Okay, you are forgiven! In fact, I can sympathize. But I won't judge Clark or Caitlyn for what Classicalla lets them do. After all, its not their fault!

And, another stupid question regarding the plot: Why on earth doesn't Jon consult Los about his health? He is a healer, even a good one. And he has quite some experience with the kryptonian physiology and anatomy. Even better, let Los and Caitlyn do the checkup together.

Hehe....


Yes, Los will be helping. Jon isn't asking because he'd like to ignore it. Lara has picked up that he feels sick because he is just now really realizing it himself.


Hey, Ann. Did you catch Clark's nightmare?

Hmmmm, yes, I think I did. But I don't want to go back and re-read it. No Halloween monsters could be even remotely as scary to me as stumbling upon what was going on with Clark just before he had that nightmare.

Anyway, I'm glad that Los will help Jon. Both Los and Jon are adorable boys!!!

Ann