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Wow! I'm first. I'd better read this and then I'll be back!  Sue! You have got to get back here and write the final chaper to this trilogy. I'm dying to know how Lois reacts to Superman's revelation. I think she's going to be thrilled! Write on!  Anne
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Top Banana
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Wow! That was like teetering on the brink of a precipice. I was with Clark every daring, scary step of the way.  Yvonne
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Top Banana
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Sue, you rock! You made my CRY, and it wasn't even a sad thing! That takes some serious skills, gal. 
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
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Pulitzer
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Wow that was great! I loved it but there has to be more. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Kerth
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Awwww! I wasn't even meaning to make anyone cry... yet. <heh>
Thanks guys for the encouragement. This is the second in a planned series of five. One of my favorite things on the show were all the moments he almost told her or she almost figured it out. I wanted to see them dancing on the edge for a bit.
Thanks!
Sue
Lois: You know, I have a funny feeling that you didn't tell me your biggest secret.
Clark: Well, just to put your little mind at ease, Lois, you're right.
Ides of Metropolis
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Kerth
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 "Just tell her. And then, if she's petty enough to be angry with you, fly back over here and tell me."
He stood and held his hand out to help her up. "I'll do that."
"Promise?" she asked she hoped with all her heart *would* reject him. Clark is dead. There is no way that he can tell her now without a Tank Ending Warning being needed!
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Kerth
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I'm glad to hear that there will not be one, but three more parts! I love seeing them dance around the revelation/discovery, so I love your story.
But please, make do without a Tank ending, please! And give us some more interaction between a suspicious Lois and a Clark looking like the proverbial cat who ate the canary.
The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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Oh, you so can't leave it there!
I hope you post the next story soon! This was so sweet and tense...
Hutch
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Originally posted by Framework4:
Clark is dead. There is no way that he can tell her now without a Tank Ending Warning being needed! No kidding! But Sue will bring him back from the dead, right Sue? Sue?
Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.
- Under the Tuscan Sun
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Columnist
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Artfully and wonderfully written. Beautiful story.
MORE!
Silence is violence. End white supremacy based violence
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Merriwether
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I can't believe I totally forgot to read this. I read Proof when it first came out and I'm going to check if I left FDK.
Gee wiz. That was great. I loved the questioning back and forth and how you didn't just restrict it to a few and have him fly off.
Wow, jumping out of this post and on to the next part!
I've converted to lurk-ism... hopefully only temporary.
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