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Becca needs a mother! Lois...maybe?
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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So Clark's not good enough, eh?
It's never too dark to be cool.
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Oh, Clark is a wonderful father. He just needs help.
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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I've been unable to understand why Clark wouldn't let Becca call him "Dad". After reading this story, I'm even more confused. But, imagine Lois' (?) surprise when she will finally find out that daddy Clark is still a virgin. Looking forward to the next part... Mellie
The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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Well, Barbara, I enjoyed this part a lot. It was very interesting to hear how Clark came to be Becca's "father". Of course, we don't yet know how he came to be the single parent of Becca. How did Lily die? I loved your description of Clark's sleeplessness. I can easily sympathize with how horrible it must have been to lie awake and listen to all the sirens of Metropolis - and there are a lot of them in big cities, that's for sure! He needs to go out and help, but he needs to keep his abilities a secret, and he needs to stay home for Becca's sake. What a horrible situation! Ah, but then I loved how he could finally fall asleep when Becca needed to sleep in his bed, and her presence calmed him enough to make him fall asleep himself. But I agree with the others here that there is one more person who needs to be brought into Clark's life, and that is Lois, of course! Ann
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And she will be a part of it. I hope you like my plan for her. But I won't write spoilers here. As to the dad - problem. I will solve that as well, just not in Sunday's Gain, I guess. A little note...it's a problem of days from the past. Becca just keeps reminding him as a part of a game she likes to play.
It's never too dark to be cool.
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But, imagine Lois' (?) surprise when she will finally find out that daddy Clark is still a virgin. Hey Barbara, where's your signature from, by the way? It's so amusing. Was that in a movie?
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Hi, Great part!
Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF
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Well I thought about Clark's virginity and I'll sure as hell mention that. As to my signiture, I don't exactly know where it's from. It's just something a friend of me used often in her dark ages of puberty. And we still do. Sometimes. Okay, more often.
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How moving, caring and wonderful.
Clark is TRUELY the last Boy Scout - who else would be kind enough to adopt a cousin's baby when she is in distress.
Looking forward to more.
SNL
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I've read all four parts and I can't wait to see where it leads. It is a interesting storyline and I love Becca.
Can't wait to see Lois appear and how she will react.
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I have been reading this story and finally have time to comment... Wonderful tale, I love where this is going and it's a different spin that just might make our favorite couple fall faster in love However, what happened to Lily? Did she die? Run away? Great story and cute little girl (a lot like Clark in some ways and I hope soon to see like Lois in others) haha the two haven't even really met yet, and I am planning their story wedding already :rolleyes: ~Lois Lane Wanna Be
"Live with intention. Walk to the edge. Listen Hard. Practice wellness. Play with abandon. Laugh. Choose with no regret. Continue to learn. Appreciate your friends. Do what you love. Live as if this is all there is." ~Mary Anne Radmacher
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I like the story, bakasi. And her birth certificate says that you’re her dad. I told them your name when they asked me for it.” Lily clutched at Clark and tears streamed down her cheeks. So if Clark was listed as the father on the birth certificate, then darn it all, why did those social workers give him such a hard time over keeping her? So everybody else is asking if Lily is dead. How about this one - How long has Clark had Becca? Since she was a baby? ~~I'm only a man in a silly red sheet~~
~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Wonderful tale, I love where this is going and it's a different spin that just might make our favorite couple fall faster in love Thanks, LLWB, your making my day! All of you! Thanks for the comments. I never thought that Lily would become such a mystery, but I'm glad that she is. ! I love secrets !
It's never too dark to be cool.
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