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Hi Nancy,

I've just logged in and seen Part 37. A brilliant surprise to have the next episode earlier in the week.

What can I say but WOW!!!!

Stuart

Well, looks like I have more time than I originally thought. so, here comes some feedback:

Well, soon he'll have a Martian Manhunter chain (maybe?), a FireWind chain (for sure), a Steel Lightning chain (sure thing!), a Purple Pixie chain, a Blue Fairie chain... You see where my thoughts are headed.

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How do you do this, making my eyes go wet like that? (Well, perhaps not quite like that...)

Gotta go for now. Time is running out again. But I'll be back. Promise.

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Uh-oh! That means trouble! Who will Los and K'al be? Clark's cousins? Nephews? Or will he tell everyone that they are his sons? Hopefully, Clark doesn't say anything stupid around Stuart. Oh, and what will K'al's and Los' first names be? I can see it coming:
"Oh, they are called Carl and Los. Originally, we expected only one boy and wanted to name him Carlos, but since we got two, we just split the name..."

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K'al behaves like an *** ****. I hope he doesn't have the means to force Los into a relationship of any sort. Perhaps Kal senior might intervene? Or offer Los to stay permanently. Or something.

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OMG! How terrible. I'm just glad Clark reacts the way he does. He's truly a great dad.

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Oh, my! These little episodes are just ... so .. Cat. The way she was in the series. A pity seh didn't last longer, or we might have seen scenes like these in the flesh. Will you write some of those? You certainly don't lack in inspiration.

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Ah, Caitlyn is getting some of her own medicine. Well, turnabout is fair play!

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Wow! Can I have him? Please? (Okay just kidding. That's really bunny-ish. And can't have lasted too long. So, where's the fun?)

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Figured something out about flying sprites? Good. Very good. Should make her aware of the whole family.

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Nice costume! And I really like the fact that she sports the Batsymbol - even if it's only small. IUt's a nice touch.

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WHOA! That's a WHAM! Ah, so that's what Los referred to when he claimed that Ching was not honorable. I guess it is good for Los, at least. He might find it easier to get involved with Mari that way. Who is going to stop him now?

Can't wait for the next part, Nancy. Don't take too long...

hehehe! Nice part, Nancy!




Who are you brining in next? (Hopefully not Chewbacca. LOL!)

Gee... stop it with the whamming, already. I hope he's ok!!!!

I'm counting this as a double wham!

Well... You can't do *that*. duh. Mr. Spock isn't real! He's a character on a TV show.
(huh? what? you mean, Clark isn't real either? darn it! All my dreams just went right to hell! hehehehe! Don't mind me, I always make stupid comments on purpose.)

Really great part, Nancy! I can't wait for the next! (off to do that thingy I told you I'd try this morning, now. I'll let you know as soon as I can.)

Nancy, I think your story must have the best "family feeling" ever of all LNC fanfics. In Clark's big, happy, generous family, everyone is important and everyone counts. And there always seems to be room for more people. Unless you are not there to make trouble, it appears that you would almost always be a welcome visitor. Your story makes your readers feel, I think, that they, too, could come to Clark's house and be welcomed there as guests. It's almost as if your story blurred the lines between fiction and reality, in almost the same way that the movie "Who Framed Roger Rabbit" blurred the lines between real people and cartoons.

But there is one person who is not there in Clark's family, and who I, the world's greatest Lois fan, always miss so bitterly. I so, so, so wish that Lois could be a part of this story, that she could get to meet all the fascinating people here and be a part of everything that happens. And of course: I would so, so, so much love to see her as Clark's wife, standing by her man and loving him, being loved by him in return, and raising their children with him.

But that will not happen, and sometimes I feel as if I miss her so much that I can't bear to go on reading your story. You know that I need to feel that Lois remains a part of this family in spirit, at least, if not in the flesh. And in this part you did make Clark talk about her and cry for her:

Well, I think Lois was unbelievably brave, considering she knew about her own impending death but managed to be a bright and happy center for her family all the same, concealing the truth of her looming demise while she was making preparations to help her children get on without her.

Not only Clark but also Jon misses Lois in this chapter:

Ah, but poor, poor, poor Lara:

Oh, oh, oh. How could it ever be a child's fault that his or her mother died while giving birth to this child? It can't ever be the baby's fault. It's not as if the baby asked to come into existence.

So I so, so hope that poor little Lara will get over her horrible guilt. But I, the Lois fan, also hope that Lara will find some confirmation that Lois loved her, and Lois wasn't angry at Lara and never blamed Lara for what happened to her. I would like to see Lara make a slightly stronger connection with Lois, if that is at all possible.

And as for Claire's tears... I think I know what they are about, and I guess you know what I'm hoping to see when it comes to Claire.

So many things were fascinating in this chapter. I like Los more and more, and at the same time I like K'al less and less.

K'al and Los are both telepaths, and another telepath visited the Kent home in this chapter - J'on J'onzz. He was always one of my favorite members of the Justice League. It was great fun to see him here! And while J'on J'onzz is a green man from Mars, Mister Spock is a slightly less green Vulcan form Vulcan. You know Mister Spock is an old favorite of mine, so I won't object if he visits the Kents in a later chapter, Nancy!

A young man whom I like more and more is Jon. I love the fact that he is a good singer, and that he would care so much for his little sister that he would comfort her by writing a song for her. I was so shocked when he started bleeding so badly. I don't really think that anything truly bad will happen to him - I think that is the rule of your story, Lois is dead but no one else will die - so he will obviously survive, though it's not absolutely certain he will not suffer any ill effects afterwards.

Ah, well. You know there are so many things and so many people I want to see more of in this story - Jon and Hannah, Los and Marisol, Zared and Jenni, and then there are the twins, particularly Claire. And then I want to see, if possible, Lois making her (spiritual) presence known in a good way for her children's sake.

Looking forward to more, Nancy.

Ann

Thanks SNL!!

(That’s the Martian Manhunter by the way.)


Yes, I’d imagine so!

Thought you all would like that.


You liked the little raincoat bit, eh?


Thanks, Olympe!!

I couldn’t resist. A man from Mars asking if someone is from Mars in the comical sense is just too funny.

Hahaha… I wonder if the Teen Titans need their parents’ consents?

He would have in another second. Let’s just say he wasn’t paying close attention at first.

Table food bad for kitties! Isn’t it Meowoof? Especially chocolate.


Well, If I cried when I wrote it… Well, I figured at least one of you ought to have a few tears.

Oh, he does. Believe me he does.

We’ll see….

That might make a cute little vignette. I’ll do it if I can find the time.

Well, hey. They were newlyweds. And one of them was totally new at the whole thing. The other one hadn’t had any in a while. Just like teenagers….


Hehehe… Maybe. Could be. She knows about Clark. Maybe not…


I thought so.

Hey… It came about because of *your* other suggestion.


Thanks, Lara!!

Thanks!! J’on J’onzz was in a playful mood, eh?

Yes, I hope it’s not too much. The four disk Superman (aka Chris Reeve) set will have to wait…. (I just bought Seasons 2, 3, and 4 of LnC. I would have bought Season 1 if they’d had it.)


Oh? Who would that be? One of *my* heroes, maybe?

Thanks! I figured since I usually do waffy, that I’d better put that wham warning in there. As I said above, I cried when I wrote it.

I’m glad you like my little mysteries.

Well, I figured since there have been two different Battlestar Galactica series they’d surely seen one of them.

Thanks, guys!!

This is starting to feel like a classic "are you thinking what I'm thinking". LOL! Who do you think I meant? Huh? Huh? (or rather, who would YOU have as #1 on that list?)

Ann... I'm starting to wonder if you're my virtual twin. I've yet to find something that I like which you don't end up stating you like as well. *lol*

Oh, my, I come back and Ann’s post showed up before mine did. Makes me look like I was ignoring you. Yikes. Thanks so much for your post!!


Thanks so much. Now if more people would just read it…

I know.

Yes, she was. I saw a news show years ago about a lady who knew she was dying. She made loads of videos for her kids. That’s where the idea came from.

No, of course not, but the child might certainly feel that way.


This has been my intent all along. K’al was raised to be the leader of NK. He is hard and tough.


Yes, but you are very observant. I’m planning something, but I’m not saying what. And yes, I like that bit about Jon letting Lara help him write a song about Tebby, too.

Well, Lara (NO,NO. this is supposed to LOS), Jon and Zared both wear black. And I’ve established that they both look an awful lot like their daddy. Then there’s Los (and K'al), but they look more like a mix of Zara and Clark - mostly Zara. (And believe when I say that. If you have ever seen a pic of Justine Bateman's brother, you'd know what I mean. I'll see if I can find one.)

Well, guys if Mr. Spock shows up, well… that might be interesting. Maybe I’ll let Leonard Nimoy come visit instead.

Okay, I got a pic of her to post. Don't want to lose it. Now if I could just get the other one to work.



Okay, there we go. Couldn't get them side by side, but you can still see how much they look alike. They looked even more alike when they were younger.

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Hi,

Great part!

Thanks, Maria!!

Thanks so much!!


I'm not telling yet or even hinting.

Drull was the blond in the NK arc. He was one of Nor's lieutenants. I'm not sure they ever said whether he was noble or not, but I doubt it since he was never called 'Lord'.


Yes, Ching was a surprise. And yes, that's what Los meant.

That was definitely a twist...

Oh, yeah - he's a cutie, isn't he?
I was thinking Zared, when I said that. Cause since he looks like Clark and Clark looks to *die for* in black, well....

So long as you leave William Shatner out of it - cause he usually gets the girl and... well, we don't want THAT, do we?

Well, I guess you figured out that 'Lara' was supposed to be 'Los' here.

And yes, I did say that Zared looks so much like Clark that in a few years it will be hard to tell them apart, so considering that... Yes, they look pretty darn good in black.