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FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34972 12/02/06 06:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico mariadferdez. OP Pulitzer
OP mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part! Quote “She’s a witch!” Becca stated. “No, she isn’t, honey. She had a bad day. Remember? She’s the woman that I saved from the fire in the apartment building.” “Bad day, pah.” Becca rolled her eyes. She could win contests at that. Clark couldn’t help but smile at the sight. Becca don't like Lois! Quote One last time, the two words that had accompanied him since he had said good-bye to Lois suddenly reappeared. First there was Hide and then came Disguise. As strange as it was, they made sense to him now. Becca’s cheers of joy only confirmed it as brilliant. Right at this moment, Clark had the feeling that he had just solved another one of his problems. (Not really) The End Get back here! Get back here! MAF Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34973 12/02/06 07:19 AM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Good story, bakasi. Will Becca also have a disguise? So she can go flying with Superman? ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34974 12/02/06 07:48 AM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany Lara Joelle Kent Kerth
Lara Joelle Kent Kerth Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany	Fine story. Fine non-ending. Get back here, or ... The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34975 12/02/06 04:01 PM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Mooooooore!!!!!!!!! ~•~

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34976 12/02/06 04:04 PM
Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA Sheila Top Banana
Sheila Top Banana Joined: Oct 2003 Posts: 1,363 Savannah, GA	Very nicely done. I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34977 12/02/06 04:21 PM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Quote Thanks to LaraMoon. You always make me smile when I read your comments. Did I ever tell you how much they help me writing? awww! you just made my day!! I loved the encounter with Bobby - he's a great character and I think you got him exactly right. This is one thing that I believe you do very well: your depiction of the characters is always so true to them; it's how the expect them to be. When I'm reading through the stories, I can almost see them coming right out the pages because they seem so real. I really enjoyed this story and I cannot wait to see Becca again. Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34978 12/02/06 08:33 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 738 Germany Tahu Columnist
Tahu Columnist Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 738 Germany	Great story. I am addicted to Becca. I want more soon. Come back here.

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34979 12/02/06 08:57 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Haven't I replied to this? My bad, Barbara. Forgive me. I liked this story a lot! I really, really like to see Clark with a child. He is an adorable father!!! And I don't have to tell you I want to see Clark with Lois, too. I liked the way Lois respected Clark as a father here. She respected the way he wanted to take care of Becca to the best of his abilities. I loved how she was the one who told him that he could have Monday off, which meant that he would be able to take Becca to her first day of school in Metropolis! Yes!!! Ah... but... now Lois thinks that the man who saved lives from those burning buildings may actually be the arsonist himself. <groan> I can see trouble brewing. And of course, we need to make Becca trust Lois! How can we do that???? Barbara, you have your work cut out for you!!! I'm really looking forward to more of this!!! Ann

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34980 12/02/06 11:45 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,636 Likes: 44 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,636 Likes: 44 Germany	Thanks guys, I appreciate your feeback. You're making my day! Don't know yet, how soon I can get back. But I know how it's going to go on. So please stay tight for "Seeking Heroes" It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK:Sunday's Gain-Part 8 #34981 12/03/06 01:01 AM
Joined: May 2005 Posts: 1,662 Seattle, WA area woody Merriwether
woody Merriwether Joined: May 2005 Posts: 1,662 Seattle, WA area	Yay, the sequel's sequel. I think, therefore, I get bananas. When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about. What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence? I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.

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