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Can’t…can’t you make this witch disappear? I don’t like her. And I don’t think daddy does either. I mean, she says things to him… Dad would get angry with me if I behaved like that.  Lois is in TROUBLE!!
~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Ooooh! You posted it!  ) Before he goes to bed, Clark checks on Becca. She is lying on the edge of her bed, her feet and legs outside, her upper body half way in. As he gently lifts her inside her bed again, she’s mumbling. Clark listens. “Please say yes.” He hears her drowsy voice say.
“Always,” he replies in a soft whisper and blows a kiss on her forehead. I get all misty eyed everytime I read this part. It's like all... awwww!!! It just tells you exactly how much she means to him, right there and it's just so touching and beautiful. Makes me wish I was 7 again (and that I had him for a father, of course!!)
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Kerth
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Wonderful! Becca reacts to Lois like a child to a (future) stepmother. Is this an omen? (Stupid question, I'm sure it is.) But that leads to many problems you'll have to solve. Good to know you have a lot more to write about Clark, Becca and Lois. 
The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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-Edit- Sorry, posted it twice. 
The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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Glad that you liked it (apart from Ann, who still needs to come to terms with this being just fun  ) Makes me wish I was 7 again (and that I had him for a father, of course!!) Me too Lara. Well, we'll see if I'm able to change Becca's mind. Maybe she could strip Loia to see that Clark's love has no wart? I don't think Clark would be adverse to that idea, huh? I better go back writing, then. 
It's never too dark to be cool. 
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Becca strip Lois?  I'd love to read it, but then Becca would get in too much trouble wiht Daddy--if he could recover from his embarrassment and pleasure at the sight.
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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Merriwether
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This was great. The reasoning seems so perfectly childlike!
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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Hi, Poor child!  He doesn’t like her and he can’t get rid of her himself. And I don’t think he would let me help him. Daddy is nice to everyone. Even to the witch. I bet that she has a wart. I didn’t see it yet, but she must have one. She doesn’t like children. She called me a crybaby! I mean, that’s all proof, don’t you think, Mr. Claus? Daddy said that I shouldn’t accuse anyone without proof.
You don’t need to bring me something for Christmas; this is all I want. I can do without presents for three years, if you can grant me this one. Will you? Please? I’ll be nice for the rest of the year. Really nice! I’ll clean daddy’s shoes. I’ll make breakfast every morning. I’ll even go to school without complaining. Really! Big promise! If you tell me that I’m not allowed to go ice-skating, that’s okay as well. I’ll do anything. Please help me! You can't leave this story until Lois and Becca fix the relation. More of this story! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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