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Clark is going to come home to find Lois in his apartment wearing his clothes! This will be interesting. Oh boy, they ran into each other in the bathroom. This is going to be more than interesting! Well, maybe not face to face, since Lois eyes were definitely fixed on something *far* below. LOL! She's only human.  "Lois, what on earth are you doing here?"
Lois hadn't regained control of her speech yet.
"Lois?"
Suddenly speech returned to her. "I - I was just going to take a bath. Uhm." Like it is the most natural thing in the world for her to be at his apartment taking a bath! Clark is picking up Lois' habits. That's kinda sweet. Clark has no problems being just a tiny but tricky to get Lois close to him!
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At least Lois knows what he's got to offer...and she likes it.  
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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Lol cute story. More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Very cute.
I loved the popcorn thing, and of course Clark fresh out of the shower!
Can't wait for more!
"Lois Lane is Clark Kent's Superman." - Brian Miller
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Oh....this is great! I'm loving it. Please hurry back! I want to read more about Clark's assetts. 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Ok... I know Lisa has quoted this already, but I have to...!! With a shock Clark realized that he was face to face with Lois. Well, maybe not face to face, since Lois eyes were definitely fixed on something *far* below. *Priceless*!! Absolutely, completely *priceless*. Of course, we can so totally understand her, can't we?  And the bit about the tomato was just as tasty. I've loved this part - I hope to see the next one coming soon. This is really cute!
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Thanks to Nancy for looking over it, doing some "mini-beta" You are so welcome. Her evidence against certain judges had been at her place as well. She’ll get more. The guys that did this to Lois are in big trouble!! Just when he reached for the door, it opened, seemingly of its own accord. With a shock Clark realized that he was face to face with Lois. Well, maybe not face to face, since Lois eyes were definitely fixed on something *far* below. Wonderful… Lois has just met Little Clark. When he entered, he saw a hint of disappointment on her face and couldn't help wondering whether this was the case because he was dressed by now. Hehehehe… "I was back home when I caught sight of fire in my kitchen. Not that this is too unusual, but this time I wasn't even trying to cook," she tried herself at humor, Poor Lois… Can’t cook… While washing the dishes, Clark's mind was working furiously. 'This is going to get interesting. Keeping up my secret identity during her stay will be hard. That is, if I still want to keep it going. I'm not so sure about that. But how am I going to tell her, much less explain myself?' Truth to tell, he had absolutely no idea. Uh-Oh… Clark’s in trouble. Better tell her… Clark started his little experiment by moving the tub with the popcorn ever so slightly, so Lois was unable to reach it comfortably, at least in her current position. Her response was exactly as he had hoped. She moved a little in his direction. By then, their legs were nearly touching. Sneaky, Clark, sneaky…
~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Don't have a lot of time to comment, but I loved this! The idea of Clark coming out of his bathroom and suddenly just introducing Lois to, ummm, Little Elvis - (ah, you know what I mean) - well, did I like it or did I like it? Can we hope for a more thorough introduction later on in this story? Maybe, maybe not - perhaps it doesn't bode so well that this is posted in the PG folder. I loved that snuggling on the sofa, where Clark cleverly moved the popcorn until Lois was in his arms. Sweet moves, Clark!!!  Of course, I have to wonder how that fire got started in Lois's kitchen, who is behind it, and what else that person, or those people, may try to do. And I really, really wonder why Lois was so scared and confused when she woke up the next morning. Please tell me she didn't inhale something in her apartment that made her get amnesia twelve hours later! Ann
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Clark forgot his manners. He didn't introduce her properly to Clark Jr. They didn't exchange names. (Course only Lois would have to be introduced.)
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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Thanks for the great feedback! And, of course, I will be back. Since I'm a slow writer, I'll only post once per week, though. Posted by MrsMosley
Clark is picking up Lois' habits. That's kinda sweet. I don't know what exactly you're talking about. The list, maybe? Posted by Sheila
I want to read more about Clark's assetts. Sorry, Clark's assets will have to wait. Perhaps I will write an n-fic version after I'm done, but I don't know yet. Thanks again to Nancy, this time for extensive feedback! Posted by Classicalla
Wonderful… Lois has just met Little Clark. Little Clark, or just plain Clarkie?  Posted by Classicalla
Poor Lois… Can’t cook… It's not a secret, is it now? Posted by TOC
Can we hope for a more thorough introduction later on in this story? Maybe, maybe not - perhaps it doesn't bode so well that this is posted in the PG folder. You got that right. It is the PG folder. But, later on, you will see flesh again. Promise. Posted by TOC
Of course, I have to wonder how that fire got started in Lois's kitchen, who is behind it, and what else that person, or those people, may try to do. Oh, and I thought I'd let them not get anywhere with that story. I'd better ask my muse for advice if I want to survive this. Stupid me!  Posted by TOC
And I really, really wonder why Lois was so scared and confused when she woke up the next morning. Please tell me she didn't inhale something in her apartment that made her get amnesia twelve hours later! No way! Promise. But when you wake up, do you immediately know where you are and what you did last night? I need some time to recover my memory. Like Lois, I'm not a morning person, so I guess it figures that she reacts like that. Posted by Woody
Clark forgot his manners. He didn't introduce her properly to Clark Jr. They didn't exchange names. (Course only Lois would have to be introduced.) I think it's the other way round. "Clark Jr." is well aware of who Lois is - after all, she makes him an upright person, so to speak. 
The only known quantity that moves faster than
light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)
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Hi, Great start! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Oh, Olympe, I guess I phrased it wrong. I meant it more like the way you responded. Only Clark, Jr. would be unknown/unfamiliar to the other party.
Upright person, indeed!
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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are you sure this is pg. i see it going to the dark side which is good hahahahha
I will and always be a big fan of Lois and Clark forever and forever.
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Mellie, I told you this was on my reading-list. And it is just great. All the waffy B-plot. And the spark in your writing. BTW: do you know how many swim-wear-wearing plot-bunnies this story has sparked for the gutter-festival in June? Although, they are still looking for an A-plot, or even a B-plot, to be adopted by. I refuse to write something without both A- and B-plot. At least until I do cave in and go for it anyway Can always reuse the scenes later  Michael PS: I, too, am worried about the folder. And that's even with knowing about part 8.5 already.
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