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#35229 12/05/06 07:52 PM
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Crystal, I love the way your vignette turned out almost like a laundry list of reasons why Lois Lane loves Clark Kent. It has something to do with the alphabet, too:

A: -

B: He is her best friend.

C: She loves his character.

D: He is dependable.

E: -

F: -

G: -

H: -

I: He is intelligent.

J: -

K: He is kind.

L: She loves him.

M: He makes sense.

N: He is near-sighted.

O: He is ordinary.

P: He is her partner.

Q: -

R: -

S: He has a lovely smile.

T: He is thoughtful.

U: She loves his unfortunate taste in neckwear.

V: -

W: She loves his wit.

X: -

Y: -

Z: -


Well, Crystal, giving us fourteen alphabet-reasons out of twenty-six possible ones for why Lois loves Clark Kent in a vignette comprising fourteen lines and, I think, a hundred and twenty-one words - that must mean, surely, that the universe itself has decreed that Lois and Lane and Clark Kent are two halves destined to come together and make a perfect whole (in one). smile clap

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Oooh, wonderful little piece.

I especially love these two lines:

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No. She chose Clark. Dependable, ordinary, near-sighted Clark.

Because she loved him. His smile. His wit. His character. Even his unfortunate taste in neckwear.
Love the part about the near-sightedness (if she only knew) and the neckwear (although I always liked his ties blush )

Thanks!

-- MR angel-devil


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Ann, DJ, thank you so much for your feedback!

Ann, you know, after I posted this lil' ficlet and was drowsily drifting toward sleep, I realized it *was* a little like an alphabetical list! And the fact that you saw that too just makes me giggle. smile1 Great minds think alike, no? laugh

And DJ, thank you so much for your lovely comment! I've always thought (most of) Clark's ties are nothing if not perfect, too. thumbsup


~ Crystal

"Not all those who wander are lost." — JRR Tolkien

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