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FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35389 12/08/06 03:42 AM
Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles jojo_da_crow OP Top Banana
OP jojo_da_crow Top Banana Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles	Ohhh!!!! This was a really awesome little story katey! Because it was so delightful I will forgive you for not updating Frizen Stream... well for a little while anyway. I liked how it wasn't until the very end that I caught on that you were talking about Claude. For some reason I was thinking you were doing something AU and that maybe it was some guy who had tried to kill her or something. Maybe it is because it is early and I just didn't catch on fast enough. Angry Clark: CLARK SMASH! Lois: Ork!

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35390 12/08/06 03:53 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada LaraMoon Pulitzer
LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Excellent!! I loved it! Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35391 12/08/06 06:03 AM
Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA DSDragon Top Banana
DSDragon Top Banana Joined: Feb 2006 Posts: 1,437 Smithsburg, Maryland, USA	Darn. And I was hoping Claude would actually try confronting her, despite what he saw. Good story though. "You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35392 12/08/06 07:21 AM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Lovely, Katey. The entire ending was just beautiful: Quote She was married. She was pregnant. She was his, that other man’s, and he was hers. Utterly and completely. And he knew, without a shadow of a doubt that were he ever to meet her again, it would be she who had the blank look, the one who would not remember or recognize him. Claude Bontecou had long ago lost any remaining power he might have had over Lois Lane. It wasn't just the ending that was beautiful, but everything that came before the ending set up the ending so perfectly! And I have to agree with Jojo: I always love to see a pregnant Lois. (Well, assuming she is pregnant with Clark's child, but that really goes without saying.) Beautiful, Katey! Ann

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35393 12/08/06 08:26 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	HAHA! That was great! In your face, Claude! Jackie Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35394 12/08/06 10:02 AM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany Lara Joelle Kent Kerth
Lara Joelle Kent Kerth Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany	Loved it, too. Nice to be on the receiving end for a change, isn't it, Claude? The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35395 12/08/06 03:07 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Loved it! I caught on that it was Claude right away - creep. I'd have loved to have seen her give Claude the blank look (like she really wouldn't remember who he was). Quote But no, she had managed to babble on for two hours. Lois... ever the big mouth. ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35396 12/10/06 04:43 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn... T Tank Merriwether
Tank Merriwether T Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,999 The edge of civilization, Minn...	Cute story. Yes, it was pretty obvious that the person in the story was Claude, but that didn't spoil the 'punchline'. Tank (who is not particularly happy that Lois was pregnant)

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35397 12/10/06 06:31 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida M MrsMosley Merriwether
MrsMosley Merriwether M Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,883 Florida	Good story! lisa in the sky with diamonds

Re: FDK: The Best Revenge 1/1 #35398 12/10/06 08:37 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State Nan Kerth
Nan Kerth Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,380 Likes: 1 The Lone Star State	LOL. Good story. It would have been nice to see him try to confront Lois, just before Clark showed up but there are a million wonderful scenarios one can imagine concerning Lois meeting Claude again. And no, having Clark hold him over a pit of alligators is not one of them ... Nan Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.

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