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I wish that Lucy and Jimmy would now just take the hints and leave Lois and Clark alone. Now the dare...I was a little confused. "Your dare is quite simple. Just take Lois and set her down onto your lap," she dared Clark. How would this dare prove that Lois and Clark are really head over heals for each other? Nevertheless, it was an awesome chapter and I am really loving this story. Everyone knows that they're in love but them. Now, Lucy is a quick study and picking up on all of hints. Clark is all but selling it out for Lois. Why doesn't she just lower her defenses and see what a wonderful man is right in front of her? Oh, and I cannot believe that Clark up and told everyone that he was a virgin. Not the boyscout! He'd be too embarrassed! 
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Hi, Great part! 
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
MAF
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Wow
this story is so entertaining. I was lol while I was reading
Great job
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Lucy could have sworn that Clark and her sister had been floating in midair. Wah - Oh…. You already know Mad Dog Lane – and her specialty of ferreting out things you *don't* want out in the open. Let me assure you that Lucy is equally good at it, so Watch Out! And how was I to survive with two Lane women hot on my trail? Two Mad Dog Lanes!! Jimmy looked at Clark and Lois and decided that it might be better not to dare too much. Who could tell how many clothes he’d end up having on? "Actually, I.. I'm still a virgin." At that, Jimmy blushed five shades of red.
"Sweet innocence!" Lucy whistled. Lois and Clark both looked surprised but refrained from commenting. Just a sweet young thing… "Three. There were Paul, John, and Claude."
"Oh, I remember Claude," Lucy supplied. She started singing, "Michelle, ma belle, sont des mots qui vont très bien ensemble, très bien ensemble..." John, Paul…and Claude. No George? Or Ringo? "Obviously, Jimmy is more on the inexperienced side, just like you. Clark certainly has more experience than either of you, so he fits better with me. That's why I figured that we should change our seating arrangements, you see?" Lucy explained matter-of-factly. Yeah, right! Make them evenly matched and sit Clark beside Jimmy. Ha! Clark shrugged, feeling uncomfortable. "Actually, it was never the right one who threw herself at me."
Lois raised an eyebrow at Clark, putting one hand on his thigh. "Never?"
"Well, once. It was a very near thing." Snort. This time, Lucy felt she had to make a few points. "Lois, would you *please* explain something to me?" Her older sister nodded, and she continued, "There is this incredible guy who does not only look like a god, but also has character and, yes, even style. This guy backs you up on every mad scheme of yours, helps you wherever he can - even let's you stay at his place, he is always there for you - and you honestly claim that you're 'just friends'? Are you nuts?!? I'd have jumped him ages ago!" Hey, if Lois doesn’t want him then there are plenty of us gals out ‘here’ that will take him. Lois rewarded that comment with a glare. "Whether my lingerie sports the superman symbol or a bat or whatever is none of your business. Besides, you took it all back. Didn't you claim that you would have said anything in order to stop me from marrying Luthor? Including that fake proposal? I wonder what you would have done if I had accepted." He would have married you, Lois! "Oh, come on, Clark, we all want to hear that nice little tale about Mayson," Lois prompted. Talk about your lunkheads, Lois. Lois stiffened abruptly. While she was still trying to regain her speech, Clark replied, "Lucy, when did I ever said that it was Lois?" You just did, Clark.
~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Another part already? cool! I was hoping there would be something that I could read while my computer is making the last calculations on a little art project I've been working on all night.  In near to no time, theirs was a kiss full of passion. Woohoo!  After having waited for a few seconds, he started to kiss her again, this time even more passionately than before. Ooooh, Clark!  Lucy could have sworn that Clark and her sister had been floating in midair. woops... Is it me or do you keep inserting song titles in your story? Cause I see them popping up all over the place.... and they're starting to stick in my head. Especially that Tears For Fears one! hehe! Hang on... I wasn't dreaming this! There are even more further down in this story. I thought it was just my imagination in the last part (I was a little drunk myself when I read it...) and now I figured the TFF song could have been a coincidence, but you're really doing this on purpose, aren't you? "What do you mean with 'for starters'?" Lois inquired.
Her sister winked at her. "That's for us to know and you to find out!" hehehe! Looks like the joke is on her - at least a little bit, now. I love it!! Jimmy, however, was not yet done. "CK, since the cat has gotten out of the bag... I could do with some good advice, ya' know?"
"Sorry, bud, but you'll have to figure it out for yourself!" Clark replied genially, flashing him a lopsided grin. Yeah, cause you know - he's god as much a clue as you do about these things. hehehe! Because you have the most interesting skeletons in your closet! yes... red and blue ones. I told you before, girls. Were you not listening to me? LOL Tell you of his never-ending love? Propose? Die, for heaven's sake? What? ROFL!!!! That is just so hilarious!!!! Lois realized that there was something familiar about his voice. Not Clark-like, but never the less oddly familiar. If she could just put her finger on it... :rolleyes: It starts with SUPER and ends with MAN... think about it, Lois.... This is a lot of fun! Looking forwards to part 8.
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Gaaah! Poor Lois! Now her sister knows that Clark Kent is Superman and that Superman is in love with Lois, but Mad Dog Lane herself has no clue. Poor galactically stupid Lois! Ah, but the truth and dare game was such a lot of fun! Especially the part with the two male virgins, Jimmy and Clark, answering questions. Especially the way Jimmy was trying *not* to tell the others about his, eh, lack of experience. You sure had me LOL-ling at that!  Hmmm, Mellie! Are you sure you can bring this story to a *satisfying* conclusion on this side of the boards?  Looking forward hopefully to more, and, eventually, to a *satisfying* conclusion to this! Ann
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Wonderful part, Mellie.
I thoroughly enjoyed it. Especially the "floating in mid-air" thing. *LOL*
I too hope that Jimmy and Lucy leave our favorite couple alone. Maybe they can start a truth or dare game of their own at Jimmy's place. Huh?
This was very much fun!!! *gggg*
It's never too dark to be cool. 
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Thanks to all of you for the great feedback. I'm almost convinced to try an nfic by now... Sheila: "Your dare is quite simple. Just take Lois and set her down onto your lap," she dared Clark. How would this dare prove that Lois and Clark are really head over heals for each other? Well, maybe not that Clark is head over heels with her, but certainly that he is attracted. A certain part of the male anatomy... Oh, and I cannot believe that Clark up and told everyone that he was a virgin. Not the boyscout! He'd be too embarrassed! On the one hand, you're right. On the other hand, he still has Lucy's advances to consider. Besides, he is not the only one, so it's only half as bad. Or so I think. Maria: Bingo!  </font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif"> Looking forward hopefully to more, and, eventually, to a *satisfying* conclusion to this! Sigh! Who talked about satisfying? bakasi: I too hope that Jimmy and Lucy leave our favorite couple alone. Maybe they can start a truth or dare game of their own at Jimmy's place. Huh? Well, Lucy and Jimmy alone, playing truth or dare - that would be pretty much on the nfic side of life. Thanks again for your support! You've made my day!
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Jimmy was rewarded with laughter erupting all around him. Once again, Clark was the first to recover. "No, not quite. Lucy, Lois and I decided to spend the evening together and play a little game."
Jimmy looked at them, shock obvious on his face. "And - ahem - what's The Name Of The Game?" he asked, his throat constricting. Need a diagram, Jimmy? Oh, wait. Wrong folder. "Your dare is quite simple. Just take Lois and set her down onto your lap," she dared Clark.
Clark and Lois both looked equally shocked. They exchanged a look, communicating silently. Finally, Clark came to a conclusion, wrapping his arms around Lois and gently picking her up. LUCY! bad girl. Why don't you just send her with Clark into the closet and tell her to feel around? "Clark Jerome Kent, don't you dare..." Lois started to object while he was carefully lowering her down onto his lap. Lois repeatedly hit him on his chest. In a desperate attempt to stop her from hurting herself and, thus, exposing him as Superman, he kissed Lois. At first, she stiffened, but within seconds she started to kiss him back. Clark would have liked to let the kiss continue forever, but he had the feeling that he'd better stop, or his body would betray him. So, he abruptly broke the kiss, grinning sheepishly at Lois. Seeing that she needed some more time to recover her bravado, he simply pulled her towards his chest and rested his chin on her hair, thereby nicely covering any possible reactions of his treacherous body. Hm, wonders how that was supposed to work. Mellie, this is just one of the funniest little fics I've ever read. Michael
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