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James said that just the title gave him "collywobbles".
I loved it. It's good for a short, loud laugh. Two villains stuck together in the insane asylum. Beautiful.
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Heh heh, funny. Not bad at all for 20 minutes.
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After I finished it, I realized it probably would have been better if it had happened during GGGOH, and then Tempus could say, "You never did figure out who Superman is. It's Clark Kent. Duh!"
Thanks for the FDK.
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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Top Banana
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This is a cute, funny fic . . . and it seems like it could go longer to me too. 
"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game Darcy\'s Place
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Hee hee, funny Woody. 
Smile and the world smiles with you ... frown and you're just giving yourself wrinkles.
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Yeah, I would have loved to see the Clark Kent, duh!
Loved it!
~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~
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Merriwether
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Thinking about it, I just realized that this could turn into a drama, with Trask trying to figure out who Superman is from Tempus, using some of the other inmates.
Problem with that is I don't do well with drama.
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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Pulitzer
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hehe - nice work, Woody! Definitely love to see Trask stuck someplace where he can't get back from easily. And his being ignored by Tempus... hahahaha! Well done!!
Superman: Why is it that good villains never die?
Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains?
=> Superman/Batman: Public Enemies
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Nice piece, woody. Too very bad guys in one prison. Maybe we can add Lex Luthor to the mixture.  Anyway, Trask meeting Tempus was definitely funny. 
It's never too dark to be cool. 
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haha! James
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Thank you all.
For every bad guy on the twenty minute challenge, I'll try to continue this, adding them to the fold.
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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There will probably be more villains to come, but there are plenty of other people in the show. For now I'm only using canon characters who have appeared in two or more episodes or have some presence in canon - e.g. they're mentioned more than once - beyond a single story. So The Prankster would certainly qualify, so would Sam Lane or Bobby Bigmouth, but not any of the one-episode villains unless they are referred to in other stories.
But of course anyone can post one of these challenges - it doesn't have to be just me, though I'd recommend an interval of at least a week between challenges.
Marcus L. Rowland
Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game
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Funny, Woody!
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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