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This was probably one of the best chapters of this story! It was so emotional, especially concerning Clark. His vulnearability showed. I think he is softening toward allowing Lois into his personal life.

I was afraid that Clark would be more angry at Lois than he actually was. I thought he would feel violated. However, Lois realized that she did not want to deal with an angry Clark Kent and just let it go, unaware that she simply caught Clark off guard and he didn't really know how to handle her. That's what love does to one!

But ahh...they made up. Let Smallville be magic for them. Soon! I think Becca will be surprisingly receptive!


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Well, let me say again that I love this story. Sorry my previous feedback was lost (due to the crash).


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Still loving this story. Keep going!


"You take turns, advise and protect one another, even heal or be healed when the going gets too tough. I know! That's not a game--that's friendship!" ~Shelly Mezzanoble, Confessions of a Part-Time Sorceress: A Girl's Guide to the Dungeons & Dragons Game

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Thanks guys! I appreciate that. And I will keep your previous feedback in mind. A crash can't destroy everything wink And I've got a little more time to prepare the rest ogf the story.


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