Thanks to all who left feedback, both original and resend. Luckily, James' computer archived my feedback page when he left feedback, so I was able to read everything even after the loss.
I'm repeating my original comments for those who didn't catch them the first.
Sheila, PM is definately not my favorite story to write, but as you said, I needed to show how noble Clark was. He had to demonstrate in a tangible way what his true motives were.
Framework said:
--------I can never remember when cell-phones and digital cameras and the internet and all of that came along, so I just throw it all in.----------
Doesn't matter, after all their Universe had advanced cloning and Space Stations with hundreds of people.
Welcome, Framework. Good point. I'd never thought of it that way.
Maria said:
He better give her that interview.
Maria, you remember how Lex behaved when under the influence of pheremones on the show. What do you think?
Jojo, glad you liked Clark's solution. I'm not Catholic myself, but have many friends who are--including my aquaintance, the real Sister Colleen. In the Protestant faith, we don't have a figure that exudes trust the way the nun does, so she was the perfect choice.
Classicalla, I love your giggles. I'm not sure how you get past seven with a seven-veiled outfit, but Lois has always been inventive. Right?
DSDragon, it sounds like your week was as busy as mine was. Thanks for taking the time to fit me in. Glad you enjoyed it.
I will post my next part as soon as I have the edits put in. I've spent several weeks writing only two scenes, so I'm hoping to get past that tomorrow and see how close I can get to the end.
Elisabeth
