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Well, here it is... hope you guys enjoyed my little romp.  PJ
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Yay!!!
I just *LOVED* this story, especially how L&C make the intelligent choices in the circumstances,( which kept them in character but made me not want to smack them for idiocy ).
I can't wait for "J is for...", your writing is a treat to read.
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*Happy, happy sigh*
Well done, Pam. This wasn't just a little romp. It was a fun, WAFFy treasure!
I'm not sure that this needs a sequel, but I'd welcome one with open arms!
Irene
I try to take one day at a time, but sometimes several days attack me at once.
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Wonderful story, Pam! Lovely revelation No fuss, no muss!!! Their preparations for the morning brunch was adorable between Clark trying to figure out what to bring her and Lois fussing over clothes and such... Great story! Missy
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Aw good job Pam I think I missed the first part though. Is there a TOC for this? Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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*Big WAFFy sigh*
Well, its about dang time! <g> Absolutely wonderful! I agree with the general opinion... Yay sequel!
I loved how Clark was fussing over the flowers. I would love to see that on the screen. LOL I can picture it in my head too.
You handled the A-Plot of IGACOY perfectly. It was different enough not to be just a rewrite of the show but it still kept the basic plot line. And of course all the B-Plot stuff was fantastic. Keep writing!
Caroline
You've gotta be original, because if you're like someone else, what do they need you for?
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Mmmmm, did you forget something, Pam? Like the WHAM! I'm surprized at you. This flowed along in its sweet and uncomplicated way all the way to its waffy ending. I'd call that VERY predictable. Shame on you. Good story, though, if you're into those sweet waffy stories with all that yucky stuff in them.  Tank (who hopes that the gentle writers aren't forgetting the advantages that whams can give to a story)
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Good story, though, if you're into those sweet waffy stories with all that yucky stuff in them. I am, I am! Who needs all that messy WHAM stuff? *ducks and runs* Brunch really was adorable. I cannot believe Clark pulled those flowers out of the dumpster. That was really funny.  YAY Jen
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Marvelous tale. I simply adored it. It was so funny sometimes, and Lois and Clark acted and thought just right.
I especially liked the revelation and how calmly Lois took it: she was kind of pleased with herself about figuring out herself. And Clark was relieved that Lois knew! Wow!
I also liked how Clark wants Lois treat him as a partner and how he compliments her for her work. What a quy!
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Pam,
I haven't commented on each part, but I enjoyed this story a lot. Very well done!
I also went back and read HIFH; so I'll tell you that enjoyed that again, too. Thanks for sharing.
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Wow Pam, terrific fic!!!  )
"Well, let's see, so far I've been given a glimpse of ritual crop worship, treated as your girlfriend, and I insulted your parents. No, I couldn't have planned this. Mmm, mmm." -- Lois to Clark, 'Green, Green Glow of Home'
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Wow that was terrific. I really enjoyed this story.  Melisa
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Hazzah! Pam, you always fix everything so logically and Lois never forgets that she's brilliant, even when she's insecure . I just adore that in a heroine. Another marvelous tale....you should do more of them...this instant.  Sherry
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I loved this story!!! The part where Clark is thinking about buying her flowers and then throwing them away and then getting them back from the dumpster is so cute! She didn't quite know who he was anymore, but she was looking forward to finding out. Awww! That is so sweet. She isn't angry about finding out that he's Superman, and she is accepting it in stride. I always like revelations where Lois isn't mad  . mean, we've slept together, broken up, kissed, *and* gotten back together, but did you ever buy me dinner? Noooo..." LOL!!! I certainly wouldn't complain if there was another sequel . - Alicia
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"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve
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Nice, waffy and above all, the two of them used their heads! I always prefer my heroes to be intelligent, and better, to actually show it!
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Awww..I loved it! Nice story..really a great twist on a fun episode. Can't wait for "J"! ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Yay Pam! That was fabulous! I'm with the others on nice intellegent choices... And I loved the revelation. Thank you Helga
Knowledge is knowing that tomatoes are a fruit.
Intelligence is not putting them in a fruit salad.
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Hi, Geat story.
Maria D. Ferdez.
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Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age.
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Me neither!! But why did you start from the "H", and not the "A"? See you soon. AnnaBtG.
What we've got here is failure to communicate...
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Pam,
I, too, loved the intelligence that two great reporters leant to their relationship. Great adaptation of the episode--all the parts there but in a much more logical and wonderfully waffy way.
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