I don’t think I told you when I left feedback on the first version of part 6, but they way you wrote Wayne Irig, I could actually could here him talking. I know you have seen a lot of the episodes, but you must have seen those because you have caught his inflection so well.
"Uncle Bernard!!!"
"Aaaahh, hrrrm, I'm very happy to see you too, Clara," he says and blinks like a sort of bird. Then he blushes because he blinked. I love Uncle Bernard! "I'm very happy to see that you're awake."
Aww... Uncle Bernie. But how did he get to Smallville? The Batplane? Edit: Well, I see from the next part that they are at S.T.A.R. Labs, but how did they all get there?
I like the rewrite.
