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I can't believe a feedback thread hasn't been started for this yet, I had to check twice to make sure I didn't totally embarrass myself wink . But anyway, onto the matter at hand, that story was so cute! It was so perfectly WAFFy. I loved having Lois muse out her feelings about Clark and actually act on them for once. I also thought it was pretty in character for Lois to babble on so much and for Clark to envision every scenerio but the one that happened! Lol, it was so sweet. smile Great job!

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I am with Laura. I loved this. *purrs in contentment*

This is very WAFFY. I love the way she babbled and the way Clark panics. And most importantly I like how you showed how they were both equally nervous especially in terms of how they were trying to figure out what to wear etc.

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Thanks for the sweet words, guys. I still have a big smile on my face every time I read your comments. I'm also glad this little scenario worked for you.

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Aww, so very sweet! Loved it!

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That was just so sweet! Honeymoon in Metropolis was one of my favorite episodes. Very well done and nicely written!


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Thanks, Jackie and Sheila. smile I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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Hi, Saskia! thumbsup Thank you for sharing it.

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I'm surfing backwards tonight, trying to find all the little fics that got missed when the boards went bonzo--so sorry for the seriously belated fdk.

This was sweet. Lois seemed so confused and lost. Clark didn't have much to go on, either. Like how you pulled dialogue from that other epi--I can't remember which one--for the ending.

I'm glad you decided to share.


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Andreia and Elisabeth, thank *you* for your comments. I love all comments, no matter how late they are. So there really is no need to apolise.

Thanks again. I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. And the feedback made my week.

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I can't believe I didn't know about this story sooner !
But I love it, it's so sweet and WAFFy wink !!


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